Reviews for The End of an Innocence

girlinterrupted22
2007-07-04
ch 5,

abuseyou are a rockstar. you must write more stories! lol i like the way you add all of the little details in, that makes the story that much more interesting. i'd be interested to know your thoughts on her daughter's life...

one thing though--you could probably put a note in the summary that it's rated M for chapter one, because that's the only chapter that comes close...and it doesn't even necessarily have to be M, i don't think. M's don't show up in the regular list of stories.

bionic4ever
2007-07-04
ch 5,

abuseWhat a beautiful, touching story! Very realistic, too - you have hit every emotion right on the head. Great job; I look forward to seeing more of your stories!
:)

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