Nice one. This is a good portrayl of what Luke must have gone through.

nice.

A great story. Very good.

OMG i love that song! where can i find it?

loved it!

Hey, cool connection with the song! It really does fit nicely, very reflective. Almost like a pause to think amidst all the action. Great job, this was neat!

Halo

Not bad. The proportion of fic to song leaves me feeling a bit cheated. The two fit together well, though, and I imagine however illogically that Luke is listening to the song. Your grammar seems fine.

"Nothing could make him go back in time and decide not to go to Bespin and learn the truth from Vader." Except me writing a fic about it...mind if I store that idea for possible future reference?

Entertaining songfic.

FINALLY! there is someone want to use this song as the story! i love it!

Oh I love this song too and you're right; it works really well with Luke's life. Haha if only Luke knew exactly how much Leia IS like his mother, lol.

Great story, loved reading it!