I'm going to cry really really really hard now. Because the last time you updated was 1,5 year ago and this is one of the best stories I have ever read. It's so incredibly interesting, well-written and original, not being able to know the ending stabs me in my heart!
I hadn't expected Beyond in this, but loved you so much more for it!!
God, why are you doing this!? You need to update, you just have to! It's amazing!! You don't have 354 reviews for nothing!! Please please please, I beg you!
Please!

WOA

Your story is amazing, I've read the last four chpters in one day, and I can't wait to read more.

I really hope you update soon, especially since last time has been like a year ago.

I love the way you've made the characters act, very IC, and find the story kind of adictive. The relationship between Light and L, is facinating, and I hope it gets more... intresting as the chapters go on (please tell me this will hapen soon!).

I had not read about B before, but you've made it an amazing character.


That's it. Again, I my hopes are up for you finishing the story.

Kisses

WOW, what a read so far, you've got me hooked! The development is incredible, really well thought out and unrushed with plenty of detail and exceptionally written. Something to really get absorbed in and loose yourself for a few hours. Also quite possibly one of the first stories I have read that I haven't found any errors in aswel!

You've mentioned a few times that people are siding with Light, well I say GO L!! Show that kid who's boss. L's won fair and square in this one and has been more than accomodating with Light, the brat should be grateful for L's leniency. Though so saying I'm really finding L's childish demands for Light's attention cute and am craving more of their interactions. The gradual softening to each other is adorable and despite the rawness of the first kiss (which I loved!) I can't wait to see how the next one will play out, perhaps curiousness or aggressivness? and I wonder who will instigate it next?

The plot is starting to thicken and Im really am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. Please please update soon :D

Hi! This is your fanfic. That's right, I'm reviewing myself! I'm a great fanfiction... except for one thing. You never finished me. ;~; Do you not love me anymore? Am I not worthy of your time? Look at how many people are reviewing me! I know you're busy, but I long to be finished!

It's not too confusing, don't worry. Just a bit Matt-less. But that is always a problem for me, since I'm a Matt-fangirl :P
This fic is nothing like the usual LxLight I read, but it's still pretty good. It's nice to see how here they are definitely falling for each other but not wanting to give in, or just not realizing. I hope the next update will be soon!

So well Ryuk find Light and try to make him Kira again? and Who Dose L love more Light being Kira or BB? Strange as It sound Kira and BB would go alone vary well with one another in a twisted kind of way since reading this story it almost sound like L attachment to Light is his past memories for BB or he just like Crazy insane god like men but anyhow Love you're Story keep up The good work!.

Absolutely amazing. I love the interactions between L and Light, not to mention the plot. Although I think you'll agree about how BB often appears in Death Note fan fiction, BB in the Shinigami Realm is definitely a novelty, and it's also very believable. I'm looking forward to your explanation as to why BB had the Shinigami eyes in the first place.

I've also enjoyed reading about L and Light's...discussions/arguments about the meaning of justice. It's very thought-provoking. The quotes, too, are a very cool touch.

While the characters themselves are thoroughly in character, one thing has been bothering me: according to the rules of the Death Note, the Shinigami cannot lend their own Notes to humans. Katsumi, therefore, couldn't have written on Ryuk's Death Note. But then again...I don't see how Ryuk's little adventure with Katsumi really had an impact on the over all plot, so I guess this discrepancy isn't very important.

Anyways, thank you very much for writing. =] I can't wait to see the rest of this

~ H.D.

P.S. If you'd like to see the rule I mentioned, it's under the subtitle "How to Use: XVI" of the article titled "The Rules of Death Note" in the Death Note wiki.

WHAT?!?!? What is this nonsense?! Only 10 chapters... oh wait... thats better then I can do. XD

Amazing job! I absolutely love the diction! It makes me giggle just thinking about it! I love learning new words and I learned several... or at least actually looked up their definitions instead of guessing from the context. I can't wait to have more intelligent chapters come out. Its always hard to find a fanfiction with more brains then a squealing teenager. I wish there was more out there so I can expand my vocabulary instead of being stuck with Texans and their horrid diction and pathetic vocabularies. I shudder at the thought. I've actually lost about 17 percent of my vocabulary since I've moved here. Sad day.

Very interesting. I really hope there will be an 11th chapter because I've become rather addicted to your fic ^_^**

I love the internal musings of all the characters, and it's nice to 'look' inside the mind of the characters other than L and Light (although I really enjoy reading their thoughts too >D< )

~CR

Awesome! Don't abandon it!

When I saw Mafia, I knew that Mello was connected to it somehow...
Even if just by that...

I'm SO glad the Whammy kids are coming into this fab~ulous story...! Even Linda comes in! Yay!

Did B take over Linda... He seriously needs to learn how to act..

Oh, L! You can finally grasp what you want... You want it so badly... to be yours...and to destroy.

This story is so...! It challenges ethics, justice, what is right or wrong, and what is good and evil... Love it! So have to continue it.

Man...L, you HAVE GOT to work on the kissing.

In the beginning...: Gee L, sure are a prick to B. Poor B!! I want to hug the fella!

Ah, Beyond is still alive? Hee hee, what an interesting development. I will sit here and watch as twisted events unfold.

Love the quotes.