Good story!

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OMG that was amazing...I would cry if I was in a crying mood. RIP Ari...you shall forever be remembered by Ari Dastalmon...

That made me cry! God, i love your stories.
James Patterson should start writing like you do.
Thanks.

That was really good! I think that's how Max would really feel.

That was truly beautiful. You captivated the true depth of Ari, as well as Max in your writing. It is easy to tell that you have a wide knowledge on writing, and imagination. You can place yourself in the character's shoes, and despite the fact that many would never think Max could look up to Ari, you manage to create an amazing piece of work. Your writing is sophisticated, well-thought, factual and brilliant.
Well done! =]

sniff... Sniff...
ACHOO!

its cute and very sad.