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ThJaFl
2008-07-24 . chapter 1
nice ideas, if a little confusing in the way they are presented. I know you finished 'Where do you live', but I would have been curious to see how it might work out with Dani. If you're writing a third, and Danny Phantom had to live somewhere and go to school somewhere, I could understand Danni (if/when she was caught) having to live somewhere and go to school... You could have some fun with that.

I like the media idea too., and you can mix the two options (most of what Danny says is a complete lie to fool the media and make them look stupid, but he might talk his way into a courner).

With the big brother/big sister program, you could easily do both if both Jazz and Danny sign up, but I lean towards the 'little brother'. Is there anything special about this little brother? how will he react to seeing a glowing figure all over the town (ie. will he run up to him or far away from him)? How will he react if the media decide to press him for details? Or even, what would happen if Danny (through some ghostly intervention), got Youngblood?

I'm keeping my sugestions to before phantom planet, simply because, there is so much more things youcan cause to go wrong with a secret on the line.
werewolf5
2008-07-18 . chapter 1
do the micro management one!
inukagome15
2008-04-19 . chapter 1
I would be looking forward to your first "After Phantom Planet" story and not the one with "Change of Future". It's the one with the trip to Florida.
As for "Before Phantom Planet" I would love to read the story of the media spying on Danny Phantom. That'd be so cool.
Artgirl4
2008-03-23 . chapter 1
okay, i never really looked at this before, but you should consider doing the media one. Or an alternate "Where Do You Live?" with option B! And the big brother big sister thing with dani wounds like it would be so cool and heartwarming! I'd really like to see u try one of these at least!

Artgirl4
Permanent Chaos
2007-09-05 . chapter 1
Well since you have already written Where Do You Live...awesome story by the way...

I like the one where Clockwork shows up to tell Danny that Dan is back and he has to time travel to the future...that sounds kl, i love time travel dont you?

Sorry random question...

I also like the one where the media want to get more info on Danny and he finds out about it and starts to mess with the media...that sounds interesting!

Good luck on whatever you chose...

O and by the way...LOVE SCHOOL TROUBLE!
mystery writer5775
2007-07-30 . chapter 1
you should really do the one where danny loses his powers, it sounds exiting! not to mention the media one, and i've already started reading where do you live (you seriously need to finish that) in fact all of them sound great but i have wierd intrest levels and my intrest is only caught by the post PP and for your summeries, they're great. please write them please
Jenny30906
2007-07-18 . chapter 1
Although I haven't really posted any on here yet, I love stories after PP. I read two of yours already and like you way of view. Although, not to hurt you but to help you, I think you should elongate some your future. Other than that, keep going. Also, thank you for lookng at my story. Never thought I would EVER get so many reviews for that story.


~Jenny30906 =^^=
NarutoxxAddict
2007-07-05 . chapter 1
I like the idea before phantom planet the "where do you live?" one is one that I would totally follow and the one about Danny losing his powers! :D
Shadow Moss
2007-07-05 . chapter 1
I'd like the 'where do you live one?' my personal favorite for that would be c. I like all the other before phantom planets, too.
FunkyFish1991
2007-07-04 . chapter 1
i like the one where danny starts losing his powers
=D

FunkyFish1991
ghostkidc
2007-07-04 . chapter 1
I like both of the ones after phantom planet and the last one when he can't tell them where he lives.
Dpbuckeye
2007-07-04 . chapter 1
I like the danny losing his powers one
Min'dlei
2007-07-04 . chapter 1
I definitely agree with DPhantom-Dragon. "Where Do You Live?" plot sounds TOO good to pass. (I'm more intrigued by C more than anything else... But the rest are interesting as well, so it really is up to you if you ever write these.. Which I really hope you do. :D)

And I really like Danny's "costume change" and "Danny and Danni brother-and-sister program" ones, too. Though the one about the media sounds... Well, it's got my attention, but I think it's rather too much for one fic. You've got both Dan AND Danni in there, and these "big" stories tend to end up either cliche or rushed. I wouldn't know how it would turn out until you write the plot out, but personally, I think more people would be interested in reading it if it's got more focus on less stuff instead. (Y'know, "less is more." ;)

Your choice in the end, though. All your plots sound amazing to me, and I'd definitely read if any of these are posted. *thumbs up*
megaphantom
2007-07-04 . chapter 1
I like do the one with continueing the ongoing pp series.
Dragongal333
2007-07-04 . chapter 1
You MUST, and I repeat, MUST do 'Where do you live?' with either B or C as the plot. I'm leaning toward C, but B sounds cool also. You should also do the one about Danny's powers, or the one about Danny and the media thing. Mainly the media one, but I like to idea of Danny's power going amiss.

If you need titles, here are ones for the story plots I picked:
'Where do you live?' - Obviously.
'Losing Power' - Another obvious title
'Media Mess-up' - I could probably do better, but that's all I can think of right now.

I hope this helps! Bye.

-DPD
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