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KakashisDenimAngel
2009-12-16 . chapter 79
I liked this chapter immensely. And Neji is right Tenten is a beautiful, lethal rose. She's sweet natured but deadly when need be. Plus she carries all them pointy objects, just like thorns on a rose. So I liked the references between the two. Please do not stop writing however as I enjoy reading all of your works.
Kiba's cutie pie
2009-12-15 . chapter 10
Oh i love Kiba and Hinata, they make the cutest couple ever! and not to be mean but naruto is to stupid to relize what a great girl she is, But Kiba notices and he actully cares! forget naruto! and Neji growling haha i amost wet myself! i love your stories keep up the awesome work!
KakashisDenimAngel
2009-12-13 . chapter 26
Ok I have to say I liked how Tenten ended that story. I am a firm believer in a woman shouldn't have to wait for her "prince" to accomplish things, so I enjoyed this story quite alot.
ILuvNeji77
2009-12-13 . chapter 79
Love it! :)
phooykazooi
2009-12-12 . chapter 79
OH MY GOD!! THAT WAS SO CUTE!!

SHUT THE HELL UP EVETTE! I DON'T CARE!!
Stupid little sisters. So FREAKING ANNOYING!!
chibinejiten
2009-12-12 . chapter 78
I strongly agree.. classic IS sexy...
and naps ARE AWESOME YEAH!
chibinejiten
2009-12-12 . chapter 77
kya you're my idol onee-san
^^ wow you got a fanpage... how do i join?
PurpleChocolateShake
2009-12-10 . chapter 79
Congrats for graduating from law school! :D Good luck on the exam.. and this collection as well. It was so sweet (: Happy writing!
goddess-training
2009-12-10 . chapter 79
That was so cute!
Just where DO you come up with these ideas for...
l Iiked the way you described Tenten and the rose...'lethal' that was really original and fitting!!
Keep up the wow work!
HeavenlySwirl
2009-12-10 . chapter 79
It's been forever! Haha! Nah...I've been talking to you on dA.

Anyway, the story is awesome!
enapets21
2009-12-10 . chapter 79
Aww, so sweet!
Shadeehue
2009-12-10 . chapter 79
You're back! Welcome back! And CONGRATULATIONS on graduating law school! And GOOD LUCK for your bar exam! *big hugs* Gosh are you still gonna have time to write fanfic? I'm on holidays and I can't find the time to write fanfic! >.<

Too short! XP Hahahah kidding, I seriously don't really care much about length and whether it's drabbles or not.

Real review: Aw this was short and sweet hehehehe. I was almost half expecting Neji to go "It's a rose, duh" and making Tenten annoyed lol. Haha Lee is always great comic relief :P

I don't have a problem with the structure, I'm neither here nor there about it. To tell you the truth I usually skip reading all the beginning bits if it's too long or when some fanfic authors write complete crap at the beginning (you're not in that category don't worry). But I would strongly advise you not to go through all your old chapters to reformat and edit them because there are so many chapters to go through and you should be enjoying your break instead! Go travel, go on a road trip or something or better, come down under and visit me :P But it's up to you, if you are one of those obsessive compulsive/anally retentive law student types then do what you feel you have to do :P If you don't even like that format that much either, all the more reason not to bother doing it for your fanfic account. That's my lazy opinion. I personally would only use that structure for a challenge I'm trying to complete or a competition :P
Antanique013
2009-12-09 . chapter 79
awe how cute!! i loved it!! :]] im so glad your wrote its been forever! update soon
dianalovely1995
2009-12-09 . chapter 79
AMAZING! i love all your stories! and yeah on graduated on the 19th!
ps im not a stacker you wrote that in you author note!
MadamMistress
2009-12-09 . chapter 79
Congrats on graduating Law School! And good luck on the exam!

Also, it might be short, but it's sweet. Nothing more needed to be said in my opinion. I liked it.
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