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hinata-chan 63
2008-10-10
ch 35, anon.
abusethey are 21 years of age
Shikyo no Amatsu Shinsei
2008-10-08
ch 56,
abuse=). fluffy. all i can say is thank god u didn't end with "and i will always love u" :). An actual confession would ruin the meaning of...the whole friendship thing, so it's good u left it at that point so the readers can use their imagination :D
And also thank god u didn't make neji go and tell the fangirls off =.= that would have spoilt the sweetness of it XD

update asap! ^^
AmethystDreamer
2008-10-05
ch 56,
abuseDarn, I would love for Tenten to do some serious civillian smack down.
Neji is adorable!
ChristinaAngel
2008-10-04
ch 56,
abuseI love it! I love how Tenten thinks she isn't good enough for Neji, how she has to take the fan girls' beatings and how Neji was all worried about her and comforted her. Any chance of a continuation where Neji finds out what the fan girls are doing and gets mad? It's just I would love that to happen! Anyway thanks for updating!
BitterLife
2008-10-04
ch 56,
abusei've read many types of these kind of stories with tenten feeling out of place but i have to say your the only one who bought the whole cake!
Nichi Nara
2008-10-02
ch 56,
abuseit was sweet! i was not disappointed.
.the.brown.eyed.girl.
2008-10-01
ch 56,
abuseThe end was not disappointing. :) It was very sweet.

Hope your land-sickness goes away.
Kunoichi-of the-Leaf
2008-10-01
ch 56,
abusei THINK i understand it but...not too clear on it XD i like the neji nd tenten friendshipness if there was no love i was aware of anyway XD
Shadeehue
2008-10-01
ch 56,
abuseAw Tenten is Neji's Sun and Neji is her Moon. ^^

I was waiting and waiting till the end to see Neji declare his love for her but then it didn't come so it was a bit of a change from your usual style (I think) But I still liked it because not all stories/oneshots need to have a resolution and someitmes it's good if it's all vague and you can interpret it however you like.

Aw it sounds so bitchy highschool with the fangirls picking on poor Tenten =(

Anyway, I think I need to follow your lead and bury myself in study cos I'm very unmotivated at the moment. I hope to hear from you soon! I miss our emails =( I hope you feel better and look after yourself! *hugs*
Shenhui
2008-09-30
ch 56,
abuse*squeals like a banshee* so sweet! I can't say anything more at the moment.. my heart is bursting with that last line of Neji's..
Midnight Memories
2008-09-30
ch 56,
abuseHi,

Hopefully your new chapter will divert me and take away my bad mood.

"Deeply breathing in the crisp autumn night air, Tenten cast her eyes up toward the regal moon that reminded her of that man. " Hm, adorable line... I always like it when you use words such as, "Regal" or "noble" for Neji...

Lol, you just had to put in that Kakashi had a lot of fangirls, didn't you? lol...

Aw... Tenten's getting abused for Neji's sake... omg I love your plot line...

"If she were her younger self, Tenten would suspect that his concern meant something; but knowing Neji, she was certain his only concern was in assuring he had a sparring partner the following morning." and I suspect she's wrong. ;)

Aww, it's so beautiful as he's holding her... so... intense! I love the intensity.

I do liked the ending... I liked that he told Tenten she was like the sun... Sun and Moon, perfectly together... aw..

Take care!
mysterious-bluerose
2008-09-30
ch 56,
abuseah! omg! i missed this story so much! i'm glad you updated! ah!! you rock! go you! i loved this one!1 it's diffently on my favorite list!1 (althought most of them are) i loved it though!! please update soon!

Mysterious Bluerose
Morning Strider
2008-09-30
ch 56,
abuseHow is it that you always finish at 2 in the morning? Regardless, it's good.
Sony89
2008-09-30
ch 56,
abusei liked it ;) one of the best you wrote ;)
NejiIsMineXD
2008-09-30
ch 56,
abuseaw...*Squeal* so cute...poor tenten...stupid evil fangirls!!Back off back of!!*Rabid fangirls attack me*
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