Heya, me again. So...This one isn't done, is it? Because I really wanted to see Artie's reaction when he learned that his mother was an Unspeakable. :)

Um just wanted to bring your attention to the fact that students don't normally get to go anywhere else when they're at a boarding school, even if their parents ARE the teachers...So it's not exactly feasible for Ron to be getting him out to help clean out Figg's house, especially since he can't use any magic. If the restriction's been lifted, you should explain that...or just say that this is slightly AU and be done with it that way. :]

Anyways, great job, and I hope to see more writing soon from you!

I like the premise of this story, as well as your others. I like your writing style, and the length of your stories. But...in this chapter...since Art is only 13, wouldn't he be prohibited from performing any magic? So technically, he couldn't have unshrunk the magazines just then; let's pretend that his father unshrunk them first, and then reshrunk them. But still, he'd have to tell Hermione to cast Engorgio on them for him because he wouldn't be allowed to.

Umm...yeah that's all. Just dropping in to point that out and to say that I really love your writing. You're really good, you make the relationships seem real; their hurdles and the way they get over them are very realistic. :)

You rock, and keep writing!

AWESOME story, you do such a great job. please keep it up

Very nice! I feel so horrible for Hermione. She is my favorite character and to see her have such a hard time, it's heartbreaking really. It is still a good story nonetheless? Is this it, though? Are you writing anymore to this? I hope you are! =D

Hermione so deserves all the happiness she can get... I'm glad Artie at last understood. Excellent story! Only one more left? :(

for chapter 5 you re-posted 2

thought you should know...but this chapter was amazing!

I think you accidentally uploaded chapter 2 again as chapter 5. Just thought you might want a heads up.

Cheers!

wow...so where did she get those scars? In the dept of mysteries? I hope Art learns to forgive Hermione...

wow...i really like your story...it gave me a few ideas for mine
*writer's block SUCKS!*

um...i was wondering if you could put the 'memories' in italics or something, cuz i got confused while reading this!

so yeah...great story...keep up the good work!

*In the back of her mind, a nasty little voice told her she deserved this.* She'll never forget herself, right?

Hermione doesn't deserve this...

interesting...I can't wait to see what Ron has to say to Art about all this. Sufficient to say, we can see where Artie gets his temper from...lol

Ron needs to have a nice man to man chat with his son... :/

Ohh how is Hermione going to take this? Can't wait to find out.

Intense! But they only had one kid?