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| fwakes47 2008-04-07 ch 11,  | abuseAwesome story! Really interesting idea :) 10 out of 10! Please update soon. |
| mistress of fire 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI don't know if you are aware of this but Anne McCaffrey stated a number of years ago that she did not want fanfictions of her work. She has since fallen to peer pressure and agreed to allow her world to be used in stories but not her individual characters. If you were a true fan of Anne McCaffrey you would respect her wishes of no fanfiction about her work and delete this story posthaste. |
| Rubel 2008-02-03 ch 11, | abuseNeat. I like how you are fleshing out the slytherins a bit. Can't wait to see if anyone gets chosen to be a rider. Keep up the great work and thanks for the great read. |
| isiris 2007-10-12 ch 11, anon. | abuseGreat love the last touch... |
| Twin Tails Speed 2007-10-06 ch 11, | abuseThis is a excellent and a really interesting chapter update. |
| momocolady 2007-09-30 ch 10, | abusegood chapter |
| Sakura Lisel 2007-09-28 ch 10, | abuseAw... Blaise is just going to let them do what they've were planning a few chapters ago? After everything he's done to NOT have to do it, even go through emense torture? What did they threaten him with, and what was in the letter his mom sent him? |
| Quacked Lurker 2007-09-27 ch 10, | abuseIntesting crossover. I hadn't thought it was possible to mix Anne McCaffrey's PERN series and JK's Harry Potter books in a convincing and believable manner. I admit I was wrong. Good job. This story did make me realize a few things about the two authors and their worlds I hadn't conciously noticed before. So, extra Kudos for making me stop and think while reading this fic. Smriks. Master Harper Robinson is an excellent character and you pulled him in efficiently. The others are OC's (why not? It's a great writting experience and gives you a bit more freedom), but you summarized the knowledge of the Weyr's efficiently and effectivly. Draco being an empath was an astounding choice, but it makes sense--after all, there's more than one story being told, so the POV change was good. Hm. Blaise's predicatment. Good thing he has two firelizards--and that they are so protective. Perhaps he could find a backbone long enough for one of the visitors to reailze something's wrong and let the little dragons distract the death eaters and iniciators? Just a thought. Hard to argue with your choice of year. Also not sure what else to type. Comprehensive story/fic and I look forward to reading more when possible--keep up the excellent grammer and spelling. Enjoyed the quality plus the quantity is good too. |
| Isiris 2007-09-27 ch 10, anon. | abusegreat, keeps you reading |
| Twin Tails Speed 2007-09-27 ch 10, | abuseThis is a excellent chapter update. |
| Cherri202 2007-09-26 ch 9, | abuseVery Nice :) Please don't make Hermione get a Queen. Plz update. I know school sucks. ~Cherri~ |
| xyvortex 2007-09-08 ch 3, | abuseit's Zabini, not Zambini... I made the same mistake with my own stories early on |
| xyvortex 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abuseDraco was a bit tame toward the end of the chapter but otherwise a good start. |
| momocolady 2007-09-07 ch 9, | abusegood story |
| Twin Tails Speed 2007-09-06 ch 9, | abuseThis is a excellent and a really interesting story so far. |