thats was sso sweet i loved it

It is short but it is GREAT! I love the idea!

very adorable! I love fireworks!

another wonderful story! just like on the verge of letting go. that is so cute! if only that would happen on the tv show...

CUTE! LOVED IT

SO CUTE. Precious story with an adorable concept ^.^
Good writing style, the kind that I like, and the whole time I was reading this fanfiction, I was smiling. Yumi must have had quite an infectious grin X_x

I think you did a swell job with Yumi's character. To me, it seemed just like her. Everybody thinks differently than they act, and I could picture her perfectly throughout the whole story. It was clear, crisp, and definately in character. Yumi has got a soft side, so they've shown in the episodes.

Good job ^.^ Definately favorited.

P.S. - For some reason, the line "wanna sparkler?" made me laugh out loud. xD

I didn't happen to think it was too OOC at all. I'm sure there was some degree of it in there, but the cuteness factor of it all alone made up for it.

-Em

OMG! That is so freaking cute! I love it! Please keep up the great work, and the cuteness!

short yet sweet

kool story
im glad yumi has a soft spot
really good story keep wrtitng
urock
peace&love*

cute and funny, good job

Aw! I loved that!

Ah! It's so cute!
Oh my god. That was adorable!
And don't worry. Everyone's got a soft spot somewhere, right? Who says Yumi's can't be fireworks?
Love the story. Definitely favorited.
-Bighoggi14
... do they celebrate Fourth of July in France? xD

That was great!

Great story! Thanks for writing this! God bless!