This was a great story. Marty Jr and Harmony kissing kinda shocked me, but as Marty said, they were probably just copying the grown ups.

Now this is just a fitting end to a very interesting adventure.

Well this actually worked out wonderfully for our heroees.

So is theis the last chapter?

So Goldie Wilson I is the grandson of both Goldie and Marvin Berry? That's awesome!!

This chapter was actually very familliar and very interesting to read.

That was great. Didn't you say that Tad is going to hook up with Greta in the end?

I guess you finally took my advice to have Haven date Goldie Wilson the third. By the way nice job with the breakup scene even if it had to involve Jeb Strickland blabbing to Goldie Wilson about it. Hey i just thought of something wouldn't Goldie Jr be Goldie the second once Goldie wilson the third is born?

Marty hates Children's songs as a preschooler? That's very rare for a child. So is Rajan Ray and Rissy's little brother?

I take it you're going to do a trilogy universe story where Marty nad Jennifer go to see Jules and Verne as teenagers adn perhaps you could have them visit Teen Haven. For the record i like the refrence Haven made to Spike in chapter 7. for the record you'll have to edit one of your chapters to include a refrence to Ronny unger. Ray's little sister.

Hey not to sound mean or anything but are Rissy and her gang going to return in this story?

I remember in the first draft of part 2 when Marty said to himself "Just say no" so I figured he would be against using drugs.

I wonder how well Haven does on roller skates. Most kids in the 90s and early 00s had Rollerblades and some have never even skated on regular skates.

I was laughing my head off when both Marty's said "Whoa, this is heavy!"

I love it. I can't believe Marty punched a girl!!