This one's very emotionally charged. I loved it.
Your a gifted human being. You should definately write more.

An epic battle with disastrous results. Excellent! Gohan is one of my fave DBZ characters,and this battle shows that he is the BEST!

Great story, just fantastic. I hope to see another story coming from you.

Danni x

That was a good story. i really enjoyed reading it!!