even though I dont like magical stories this one just fits perfectly like it really happened, for that i admire u :]

this is really funny! I almost fell down laughing at '** Slap no jutsu!' Hand of the pimp no jutsu! that was hilarious!!keep up he good work, an please upate!:D

That is quite interesting. I would like to know what Sakura said about the other teams if you won't mind and I would like to see more chapters coming up please. Is this Sasuke nice or evil? I would also like to kill Sakura if anyone lets me that is.

Okay I have already read Naruto the Sk8ter Boy. Both of the fanfics were really interesting. Though you forgot to mention in Naruto the Sk8ter Boy that Naruto and Tenten were siblings. Anyways I actually love the Sakura bashing it was extremely funny. So yeah later.

Okay, this is a really great idea, I'd like to know if I could take certain parts of the stroy but change the details, after I'm done with it it would be a bit harder to figure out whose work it was, but I still want to get permission first, so, could I use the bits about the seals over their appearences, the actual description since I suck at describing looks, naruto and tenten's being siblings, and the phoenix idea with my own ideas mixed in? If not, then I guess I'll just figure something else out, but I want to try for this first.

PLEASE tell me you do intend to update this! I would really like to see were it goes! Especially with the whole "Tenten is Naruto's sister" and the "we must now kill Sakura"!

great story pleasse continue

when are you going to update this? i want to know what happens next.

Whats next, whats next.

I love your fanfics and I hope you computer get fixed soon I want read more of all your fics.

hahahahaha! i loved the end of the 1st ch. "Bich slap no jutsu! Hidden Taijutsu 'Hand of the Pimp no Jutsu!" hahahahahahaha! i fell off my chair laughing so hard. (mi folks thought i was goin crazy, til they read the ch. dont worry they thought it was funny 2!)

hey guy update

lol narutos reaction was funny allthough i think would react the same

HAND OF THE PIMP NO JUTSU Lol
i hate them though (team7 minis naru)

oh nice chapter hope you update soon! :D