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angel6.d
2009-02-09 . chapter 9
I really enjoyed this last chapter. It was everything it needed to be, short, sweet, and of course, absolutely beautiful. I loved the way you wrote it - this whole piece in fact. Very intimate, very sincere, very real.

Congratulations on completing this story, it was and is and a great one!

Keep up the great work, on any future pieces!

-angel6
angel6.d
2009-02-09 . chapter 8
Can I marry him to? =P He's so sweet! I loved this chapter! Again, his words toward her, they're so intimate, and amazingly beautiful. Just, absolutely beautiful.

I loved this line: "I'll make my home in your heart." I just thought it was really, just great, for lack of a better word. It's so sincere, and just, I loved it!

Keep up the great work!

-angel6
angel6.d
2009-02-09 . chapter 7
Another beautifully written chapter, and not to mention, very sweet. I loved it, seriously! The fact that he poured his heart out for her, about how much he needed her, and loved her. His honesty, I found to be not only very refreshing, but, heart-warming as well.

I'm very happy that she loves him back!

Great chapter again! Keep it up!

-angel6
angel6.d
2009-02-09 . chapter 6
Forgive me for not reviewing in forever! =(

This chapter was fantastic as per usual. It was so sweet that he did that for her. I have no idea what the rest of the sentence was, that he said, but I know what, "Te Amo," means. And that's very sweet, and just, beautiful.

I don't know why, but, I loved when he told her that he would be her eyes. I felt like it was so intimate, I know that sounds crazy. But, it was like a very small way of showing their trust for each other, and how deep their love was. I don't know how to properly explain it, but, just know that I really liked it! =P

Keep up the great work!

-angel6
StrawberryYogurt
2008-11-09 . chapter 9
That was such a wonderful story though I think it went much too fast, but everything else was great!
Goshikku Seirei
2008-09-18 . chapter 9
Weh! Cute!! BD are so for each other!
Simkey
2008-08-21 . chapter 3
KEEP WRITING! This is so good!
abovetherim
2008-08-17 . chapter 9
That was the best ending you could have gave it ! perfect! Great job!
WHITE ANGELS WINGS
2008-08-14 . chapter 9
HI,

VERY EXCELLENT ENDING,THEY LIVE HAPPY EVER AFTER.LOVE THE WEDDING.SO HERE 4 STAR ALL WORTHY READ I.SEND U A SMILE:):):).

WHITE ANGELS WINGS
Melchy
2008-08-12 . chapter 9
Very sweet Anna! I'm glad you skipped to the wedding scene, very romantic!
JateSkateFate815
2008-08-11 . chapter 9
Aw! That was SO SWEET!! I loved their vows. And this line:

She was the object of his everlasting desire.

I loved the whole thing! Great job!
Owl Emporium
2008-08-10 . chapter 9
Althought it went wicked fast, I loved it! It made me squee! Great job! (:

Angelica
didi6
2008-08-10 . chapter 9
Great storie, whrite soon!
You should whrite a sequel: The honeymoon please!
AndromedaAiken
2008-08-10 . chapter 9
That was nice! *grin* Well done!
JackSam
2008-08-10 . chapter 9
Love it. Add more fics soon.
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