please update it is good

What? No! DX

I have just found this story and I find out that you're quitting on me? Are you that sensitive? I wanna know what happens...

PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE PLEASE Start Writing this Again! PRETTY PLEASE!?! what do you want from me?!?! Is it money?!? I can give you money! is that what you want?!...?
SEND US A SIGN!

PLEASE CONTINUE
i cant find anoter fma/yyh crossover anywhere online (that doesnt also include harry potter, i mean its like they just WANT to make Ed mad, majic clearly defies the Law of Equivalent Exchange)
PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
PRETTY PLEASE!

pweaze dont put this story on hold! i really like it and think u should continue it. any one who thinks differently needs to get a life.

Hey damn it add more this is to god damn interesting so add to this or else!!
Just kidding but seriously add more please.

DO NOT PUT ON HOLD! I LIKE IT!

First, I really like this story its highly original -- I don't think I've ever seen a FMA/YYH crossover before -- and pretty well written. Second, while it could use a little more detail in describing some things it still hold one's attention, which is real good. Finally, you have done a good job instilling a sense of peril, something many stories lack. So please don't keep this on hold to long I really like it -- keep up the great work.

Do not put this story on hold! I want to see what happens, please!

only one teeny tiny thing. you mention in your first chapter author's note that your story will have no OC's, only original characters. OC stands for original character. If you meant no characters made up by you, it should have been only 'canon' characters'. I hope that helps. Story's not bad so far - you certainly have Ed and Al down pat...I haven't watched or read quite enough YYH to be definitive on the others. Keep up your writing!

funny who is shorter

This iis really good... update soon plz!