wait i thought that Holly was a vegitarian like most faries she would never eat chicken

Please Please PLEASE update soon!

please write more soon
its a really gd story
please write more

That was good update soon

okay right more

WRITE MORE!

Oh my gosh! I completely LOVE your line 'voice that could have frozen Niagara Falls.'! It's a-w-e-s-o-m-e. Great chapter. Glad Holly and Trouble are back together. They'll be kicking Skylar butt in no time. =P Update soon! ;]

OH! The suspense!

Aw. Ireally hope holly didn't die! That would be sad. Trouble and Holly should be reunited

Oh my Frond! Artemis Fowl, crying? Perish the thought!

Anyhoo, tis really good and you had better finish it. ;)

Aw, poor every one! That evil little Koboi! Anyway, please update soon! ;]

Sweet, you updated. That stinks, everyone thinks she's dead, that would ruin a perfectly good story if she or Trouble died. Write and Update when you have time!

This is pretty good, though some scenes seem a bit abrupt. They end, as if you've run out of ideas for the particular scene, not like it should end. Also, when you change povs, its a little difficult to follow. Other than that, fantastic plot!

More soon, please!

EK! That was a good chapy! Can't wait for more!

Please update soon! Holly and the baby have to get out alive, that would not be good for Trouble is she didn't.