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ChangedTeen or CT for short.
2009-01-07 . chapter 1
Well, I guess it couldn't hurt.

I'm submitting a servant.

Name. Tethra Vile.

Gender. Boy

Age; 16

Ability; Shadows, he has the ability to use his shadow to to an assortment of tasks including fight by using them to stretch and attack enemie's shadows which in turn hurts them. In day time, he is like a ghost, invisble besides the white robe which floats upon the ground, and un touchable. But in the dark, his shadow takes up a physical form in which he can be wounded but he can also eat. Naming his fighting, he has the ability to create a void of darkness where he stores his items and sometimes blinds foes. His weapon of choice is a short steel dagger because in the darkness, his power over shadows leave him and he must fight physically.

God- Hades

Appearance-A white hooded mages robe floats about, when you look inside the hood or under it in the day light you only see endless darkness with the shadow of a robed boy attached. But in darkness, there is a black shadowy physical body of a boy with messy hair, and is about 6.2.
Due to a curse, he has lost his physical body which rotted long ago, his body is his shadow! In day time, his shadow remains on the ground, guiding the apparent invisible boy which can interact with physical objects when the shadow interacts with their shadows. But at darkness, the shadow takes shape and forms into the boy which is when he is vulnerable.

Personality; Very somber and apologetic. Constantly does what he is told to do, un-complaining unless it goes against his code. Often lays down and falls asleep when he is not needed.Uses all free money to give to poor people.

Description.; Many years ago, two children were born. One was born at dawn, the other at dusk. Rena and Tethra Vile, both were bright and kind. But Rena like the sun came up shining and warming up everyones day much like a morning sun. He however, always was last to come and made everyone...yawn. for some reason, Rena always managed to be the one in the spotlight, whilst Tethra remained in her...shadow.

Twisted by his jealousy of his sister and imbittered by the cold townsfolk, he coldly refused to do anything which would make anyone happy. He died an unhappy boy at 16 when he was murdered by a man who claimed their father owned his justice. Later in the Underworld, Tethra was to be doomed to an eternity in everlasting darkness all alone because when he was alive, he refused to be with other people.

Realizing his great error, the boy weeped in repentence and begged for a chance to make things right. Taking pity on the soul who died before his time, Hades struck a bargain. He would be allowed to live, but he must live with the punsihment bestowed upon him. He must live 300 years doing good deeds for fellow man and be courteous, if he did, he'd be spared this punishment and be allowed to rest in peace.




Good or Bad; Good.
mrlogo
2008-07-27 . chapter 2
Master

Name:Chitose Ryuu
Age: 15-16
Gender: Female
Ability: Psychic, hypnotism, voice-power and eye-controlling-power; look into her eyes and your immediately hypnotised
Appearance: Exorcist suit from Amaenaideyo Katsu!
Personality: Fun, loves her servant (casanova) flirts outragiously with him, uses her psychic power to overpower him so he doesnt use his roses to pin her down ^^ LOL
Description: Mysterious

oh btw this is the master of casanova

they're known as the Charming Couple
Matt's awesome
mrlogo
2008-07-27 . chapter 1
I WANT TO BE A SERVANT

Name:Casanova
Gender:Wtf is meant by both genders...ima guy obviously
Age:A charming 21 year old
Weapon/Ability:Can grow plants from wherever i want as long as im there, i can create roses to charm stunning hot chicks, or vines to entangle men who get in my way
Appearance: An azn, who wears glasses, a hottie, has an aura around him of superiority,dressed like lelouch of the rebellion code geass with the cape minus the dreadful mask that would cover my charming hot sexy face =D
Personality:Im Easy going but can take advantage of women ^^
Description: Mysterious...
Type of warrior: Im an archer ofcourse (not saber)
seirahErinyes
2007-11-05 . chapter 8
Well!! that's a really great chapter! and sorry I haven't reviewed to the other story... I just somehow forgot to... anyway! I lke the way that servant thinks,! Nice Sakane! you sure are strong~! ha! you show them!
ice illuser
2007-10-14 . chapter 8
ah that was fun, having my OC appear. update soon!
mangafreak7793
2007-10-14 . chapter 8
update soon I'M GOING CRAZY JUST THINKING OF WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT
GaleBread
2007-10-14 . chapter 8
Hey! Welcome back to the cyber world! Hope you have a good trip!

Anyway, nice short chapter today, quite an interesting battle too. You do know how to write these, good work!

Have a nice day!

G.Bread
yilern
2007-10-14 . chapter 8
awesome ^^ you make all the characters sound so interesting XD i look forward for more chapters... keep up the good work!
tangerine kisses
2007-10-12 . chapter 7
i wish i had seen this notice sooner! >,<
i wished i had a character too, >.<
wah,,
so on so forth,
i really like your story, your originality and your idea!
^_^
hope to here from you...
nyahahhahahha,

_tangerinekisses_
HeSaidSheSaid
2007-09-09 . chapter 7
Nice I don't have a character or anything but this is a pretty alright story!
Keep it up Yeah??





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mangafreak7793
2007-09-02 . chapter 7
aw I wanted to see what happened next
ice illuser
2007-08-30 . chapter 7
thanks for updating! (and my OC made an appearance...yay.) update soon!
GuzProud
2007-08-29 . chapter 7
Yey it's looking nice =P but there's still some servants left... can't wait till they all show up and the real battle starts =P
Update soon ^^
Kane-sama
2007-08-29 . chapter 7
*grins* GO CYRIL!
GaleBread
2007-08-29 . chapter 7
Oh a cliffy!

What's with the teach? He's a servant or something? (well...I suppose he has to be...right?)

And so the servants fight...during the day! -runs off yelling : Where's the supervisor from the church?!?-

...And on that note...I noticed there really isn't one...which could be odd (since it became a rule to have one after the 3rd HG war...), but, you could make him/her the main villain like in F/SN.

Well then.

So Long, and Thanks for All the Fish. ;)

G.Bread (or G.SalmonSandwich =P)
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