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| JovianJeff 2008-04-30 ch 6,  | abuseMagnificent! I am glad you are continuing this story. It's my favorite of your works, and well worth the wait while other stories occupy your time. I'd rather wait and get such wonderful chapters like this then have it just churned out with bland prose (not that I believe for the moment you're capable of writing such). Good use of Morden, discussions of the Wyoldin, the fame of the Doctor, and picking my favorite era of B5. Thank you for writing this! |
| acer-sigma 2008-04-27 ch 6, | abuseSounds like Morden is really pushing his luck. I can imagine his associates wouldn't be too happy that he's bringing the attention of the DOctor onto them. Glad to see you're going to have the Doctor approach the zealots for a conversation. Since the Doctor has visited their planet, they might just know of him. |
| Harry2 2008-04-27 ch 6, | abuseMorden, some friendly advice: LEAVE NOW! Messing with The Doctor is a sure way to get yourself in hot water with your bosses among the Shadows. Leave now, while you can still order your flesh around. |
| Mackon 2008-04-27 ch 6, | abuseThis is great. Thanks for Sharing |
| JovianJeff 2008-02-22 ch 5, | abuseI LOVE this story! I'm glad you were able to come back to it. The approach to handling the Doctor, the scenes with others not initially connected, and especially the scene with the Doctor talking with Kosh. Thank you very much for coming back to this story and I hope you are able to continue it. |
| Village-Mystic 2008-02-14 ch 5, | abuseOkay, had trouble following the last paragraph, but enjoying your story overall. Thanks for sharing. |
| Village-Mystic 2008-02-14 ch 3, | abuseThe time hologram was wonderful and the very Doctor plot elements cool. Enjoying the characterization overall. Thanks for sharing. |
| Village-Mystic 2008-02-14 ch 1, | abuseFun what if. Thanks for sharing. |
| sirtechlocke 2008-02-13 ch 5, | abuseThis is very good. Characterization is spot on. And the Religious Fanatics? Oy! Looking forward to more! |
| Kateri1 2008-02-13 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter |
| selenepotter 2008-02-13 ch 5, | abusegreat chapter! The Time Lord show was priceless! But are they going to leave the Doctor alone after a show like that? |
| Harry2 2008-02-13 ch 5, | abuseOne can but HOPE that the presence of a Time Lord, let alone, one who used to be PRESIDENT of the High Council, would make the Leauge stand up and take notice. Well, it has to an extent, but you still have the threat of Morden and the Shadows onboard the startion, along with the Soul Hunters. And I think I know who THEY truly want, and its NOT Deleen! |
| Arthur Hansen 2008-02-13 ch 5, | abuseNow this was an interesting twist on a Dr. Who crossover! Looking forward to mroe! |
| FS 2008-02-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this story, but a good beta reader for grammar and spelling could get rid of many wince-worthy moments. |
| Kalann 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseThis story really ROCKS! More please! |