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Reviews For: Suffocation

ShortySC22
2007-09-14
ch 1,
abuseI loved this perspective from Sarah. Nice little story!
somnambulating
2007-08-08
ch 1,
abuseIt's really encouraging to see fanfics for such a great show. I really enjoyed this and I hope you write more.
Sirius Lack Of. . .
2007-07-13
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this. I felt the same way for her...but, didn't he say she was 18? I could be wrong...but I swore she said she was 18. No big deal. I liked the way this was written and I liked for once getting some more insight into her life, as chaotic as it is. I think you did a really good job with it.

Meagan
phyca
2007-07-13
ch 1,
abuseLovely work, especially in the end when you get inside Sarah's head. The last part when you pull it all back around to the suffocating blankets was well done. Can't wait to see more from you.
RoseLight
2007-07-10
ch 1,
abuseI was holding my breath through your entire story. You create a menacing, melancholy mood and your characterization of Sarah has remarkable depth.
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