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| Molly 2008-04-04 ch 3, anon. | abuseI like this a lot so far! You should come back and finish it. |
| cabooklover21 2007-12-29 ch 3,  | abuseOMG, please oh please finish this! I want Sara to tell him! This is such a great story, don't leave me hanging! |
| elfling65 2007-09-15 ch 3, | abuseThis chapter does my heart good. I'm so very anxious for and about the premier. I truly hope we actually hear Grissom say those words to Sara. I won't even go into a simple kiss... That's definitely asking for too much at this point. Thank you for a wonderful chapter. |
| anneruhland 2007-09-13 ch 3, | abuseTouching and sweet. I loved it. anne |
| LOCISVU 2007-09-12 ch 3, | abuseThat was a very sweet gesture. |
| Julia Le 2007-09-12 ch 3, | abuseCan't wait to read the rest. btw: It's possible that he was born 4 wks early. I was. |
| closethedoor14 2007-09-12 ch 3, | abuseI love it, and I love you. I don't know what else I can say :) |
| JackofSpade 2007-09-12 ch 3, | abuseFavorite Line: He looked like a man who would welcome her into the fold, who would give her a great big bear hug and not care about her tainted years. Like father...like son... |
| gsr4ever 2007-09-12 ch 3, | abuseSweet chapter. I always imagine Grissom giving Sara something of his mother's. |
| Nickye4 2007-09-12 ch 3, | abuseI loved this chapter, especially Grissom sharing some of his childhood/family memories with Sara. |
| gsrshipper 2007-09-12 ch 3, | abuseYay, an update! Loved this chapter. Is it wrong that your author notes are sometimes my favorite part of an update? :) Haha, they make me giggle. Thanks for sharing! |
| TDCSI 2007-09-09 ch 2, | abusepukey breath or not, I would kiss that man anywhere he wanted me too. As for the pit stains, that would be a nice touch. I'm likeing this story, please keep updating |
| Anon 2007-09-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseAbsolutely, fantastically heart-wrenching and oh-so-good! Tears just streamed down my face as I envisioned the pain of young Sara and young Gil. What a story! Please don't wait too long to update. Can't wait. Well done! |
| anneruhland 2007-09-07 ch 2, | abuseAs usual you tell a masterful story. this chapter had one of the most interesting and unusual "first" time senarios that I've read yet. And I think it rings true about him praying and bargining with God. I'jj be looking forward to more. thanks anne |
| LOCISVU 2007-09-05 ch 2, | abuseWhen I saw the preview,it showed that they didn't see Sara's body. |