| Reviews for Five Fourths |
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CaptainTish 7/13/07 . chapter 1Oh, I like that last line! Nice work! |
Knightgirl4Jack 7/5/07 . chapter 1Another Fourth of July fic! Wonderful. Poor House, not being able to see the fireworks because he didn't clean his room. That was very un-American of his Dad. They should have gone to New York. We've got the best fireworks in the country. :) |
420PeaceFrogs 7/5/07 . chapter 1:D |
Balanced 7/5/07 . chapter 1Wonderful. I love your work. |
Juliabohemian 7/4/07 . chapter 1cute! |
phoenixmagic1 7/4/07 . chapter 1this was very good! I really liked the emotion you put into each segment! Very good job! :) I liked the snarkiness between House and Wilson in the 2007 segment, very good job! Please write more! :) God and peace Vanessa :) |
AnonyMiss731 7/4/07 . chapter 1HAPPY 4TH OF JULY! WOO-HOO This was good. I especially liked the 1966 and 2007. Wilson's dialog was very enjoyable. As was House's enjoyment without an explicit reason. And in 1973, his smarts for getting the kid to do it without paying. I especially liked how very in character everyone was. Brilliant work! |
HouseaholicM 7/4/07 . chapter 1That was good. Especially since it is, you know, July Fourth. Your writing is brilliant- descriptive enough to picture what's happening. I'm pretty impressed. Good job! |
sydedalus 7/4/07 . chapter 1Very pretty. Poetic, somewhat in the way fireworks are poetic. Great voices all around, especially the fourth installment. "They can have a divorce together." Great line. Nice title as well. I'm so tied to music, I had to read the whole thing before I realized the fourths didn't refer to music. Then again, I thought today was the 3rd, so there you are. Cheers for a nice piece. |