very very nice! I loved it.

I thought that this was a very well written piece considering you have never written Bulma before. I would have liked to see I bit more of Bulma and Vegeta interaction though I understand that it was not part of the story.

I liked it because I think that you have really shown Bulma's character. Especially here;

'...if Vegeta didn’t need her, why should she be the needy one?...'

When you made her defensive towards herself because her pride got in the way, I thought that was definately Bulma.

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Interesting but good

usually i dont read these sort of things, loneliness and all but i clicked on this and loved it. its different than most BV fics. especially loved your little thought at the botto, the first one, as that seems to be something ppl forget in in this pairing. anyways, talking way to long, cute story byes :)

I thought this was a great one shot. It was pretty peaceful too. Great job on it.

Great story! It was short and sweet and the ending was perfect. You didn't overact any of the characters and that's the most probable move that Vegeta would do.

i liked it

Amazing. A simple action can speak volumes, and I found this story very sweet. :)

I thought it was great. Nice to see a story that doesn't end in an innuendo.

Nicely written :)

short and sweet. Its nice to see a change and not everyone believes every problem can be solved with sex. Some things come out better when leaving a little innocence and room for the actual mood to set in and heal itself. Good job