That was wonderful.Reminded me of someone I know, good thing she's not dead.
It's hard to understand it, really, or to discribe it, because it's different for everyone.
I could really see Elliot in this, picture her doing it.It#s the darker side of her character, the desperate one.
The ending was beautiful, I kinda expected it, so I really wasn't shocked.
Now Jordan understands.Oh, I really don't find the right words.It was perfect, with an amazing depht, and I cried, just a little.

wow, i really enjoyed that story. u have a really good talent

I'm almost speechless. This story is written as close to perfection as it could possibly come. You kept Jordan beautifully in character and, with a little imagination, Elliot too.
I didn't get depressed by reading it, I "only" got a little sad. Mostly because of what Elliot did to Jordan, but also because I kinda saw a younger me in Elliot, and that scared me a little.

Keep up the terrific work, and be proud of how well you write!

Very sad and very well written, I always admire people who can take a highly emotive topic like cutting and not turn it into some badly written cliché. I think you avoided falling into the 'normal' cutting stories category, except for the part about the asylum, which was too exaggerated for my liking. Other than that, good job!

...I'd help Jordan feel better...

Great story. it's one of the few I've read with character death, and it really is very good.

xoxox
wolf

Geez, that was depressing! What's wierd is I can almost see Elliot doing something like that (stitching it back up?! Ow! Ew!) And her mom leaving her in an asylum for a while as punishment actually seems like what she would do to poor Elliot.

Jordan's reaction to the whole thing was ratcher nicely done, too. It made her seem less like an evil...whatever Jordan is. Despite how depressing that was to read, it was exceptionally well-written (the stitches though! ack, I'm not a needle-person...).

That was truly beautiful. I absolutely love the song that you paired this with, it portrays the story perfectly. The ending didn't necessarily surprise because I had a feeling that was where it was headed. I hope you write more like this.

~kat =^-^=

Oh, that *hurt*. That hit me in a place that just aches. I'm actually crying a little now, and I have a sudden desire to read happy, lesbian fluff immediately. So, so sad, but so, so beautiful.

Holy Krishna, wasn't expecting a death-fic. Should of read the warnings on this one. Still nice, though. As in writing, not in subject matter.

you made me cry!

dammit I'm crying cause your writting is just so fantastic!

this is the only female/female couple I like and all because you have them written so wonderfuly.

I gotta go grab a tissue but before that I just gotta say this sotry was awsome

Holy crap Elise! This was like... WOAH! I'm freaking out! This was amazingly creepy and horribly morbid and awesomely written. Poor Elliot *hugs her* So sad ;-; And poor Jordan! Gah, the anguish!

Awesome job, m'dear. Dare I say it, I can see improvement between past stories and this current one, your writing style is getting better and better every time ^_^

Aww this was so sad, poor Jordaroo. Character deaths usually aren't my thing but I loved this. So well written, and the end! That was perfection.