aww so cute!

Loved it! Very cute :D

ooh. that's cute. :]

is there gonna be another chapter?
i sure hope so. haha.

I absolutely LOVED the ending. WONDERFUL work!

Fantastic writing. Really cute! :)

Loved it!! I thought both Ron and Hermione were in character.. Great job

ah I LOVED IT!
I love the way ron asks in such a ronish way and the fact that you acknowledge that fact that it's ridiculous (so many people have it be that way actually and it's so wrong and stilted)and the way she decribes harry and ron is so good. amazing job... you should be really proud.

This story is incredibly well-written. Really sweet as well. Great job.

very well written
sweet

u need 2 make a second chapter, or a sequal or somthin, cuz this was very good!!

aw...! i love the way you described everything. is there going to be a second chapter? i hope so!

Aw. I love this. Brilliant.

squee.
freakin' SQUEE
i loved this. -favorites-

i think it's fantastic the way it is... leave it to ron to ask her out in the middle of a different conversation... well done!

This is Great!(though it could be longer)