Wow, loving this... soo sad /sniffles/ I was crying in TTP when I thought Angelina (right spelling?) was going to die.

OOh is this gonna be a Minerva x Artemis fic? Or are they just gonna be friends? Whichever works for me, since I actually like Minerva and dont believe her to be a Mary-Sue.

People dont give her enough credit, and you NEVER see any good Minerva x Artemis fics around here anymore. Your story seems like a good way to introduce their relationship, whether its friendship or not. Keep writing, I'm interested.

Are you going to continue or is this a one-shot??

~BGE

Very very good! I just didn't like the part with Minerva. It's nothing about your writing, it's just that I don't like her. I REALLY don't like her... Good job anywayz!!

It's good. Logical. And no Minerva -bashing for once. I thank the.

That was really sad. I would have never thought what Artemis would do if his mother died. *thinks* Kind of sad if you think about it. I mean, he was the one who brought her back, and now she's dead. *sniffles* sad.

Wow... Interesting view on how Artemis would deal with his mother's death... Perhaps Artemis WOULD go to Minerva. Seeing as they're pretty similar. He could also go to Holly, but she probably wouldn't understand the "being a genius" part. Anyways, great job! ^^

I think a piece about Artemis Sr.'s point of view would be very interesting. I'm putting this story on story alert just in case you decide to write one! Once again, amazing job!

That was really good. I love your writing style. Holly's father died, so maybe she would have understood what it was like to lose a parent.

Shannon

P.S
The next one with the POV of Artemis the First would be interesting.