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Z.N. Singer 10/3/08 . chapter 1
Lol...you may not have succeeded in a wipe-out, but at least this one is quite good. Though I sympathize with the cause. Forget shoujo-ai - though that's bad enough - if even one person has tried to make Raki and Claire a romantic pair instead of a filial one, that one is one too many. I haven't tried to find out, guess I'm a wimp. Nice job though. I'm a reviewer at , and when our new version of the site is launched (sometime this month, ideally) there will be a fanfiction section of which I will be in charge. We will work by submission: the goal is to create a site that maintains the same standards as magazines, and serves the same role to the fanfiction community (because there are print level fafiction writers out there, they're just buried). So if you're interested in submitting, please use the email available through my profile here. Works should be attached as word documents, with the first three paragraphs copy pasted into the email. No sex(explicit, that is), Yaoi/Yuri, or offensive language. And hopefully you're not offended. I have to say it, you know.
evil-kenshin 12/6/07 . chapter 1
a well done & good fic
Nega-darkwing 9/16/07 . chapter 1
Pure WAFF indeed. But also really sweet. It makes me feel fuzzy, the good kind.

As for formating and the like, easy to follow, no complaintes.
Thy Lord Ishballa 7/19/07 . chapter 1
"Author’s note: The plan was for me and Sideris to submit a Claymore fic simultaneously – mine was to be "Lullaby," a slightly platonic WAFF while his was to be "Hush," a dark lemon – in order to create a 300 matter/energy conversion that would wipe out all OOC shuojo-ai and Gary Stu of the Claymore section.

If you’re reading this, then the attempt has failed."

LOL, nice.

"Oh well.

At least you get two more Raki x Claire fics gracing the forum now…"

that we do. you're just going to have to come up with another master plan.

oh, and the story was nice, too. thought i should mention that, this being a review and all...
Seis Kink 7/16/07 . chapter 1
This is a sweet one! I love how you portray how safe Raki feels near Clare ) It's kind of rare to see gen fics in all fandoms. And oh dear...Gary Stu and OOC shojo-ai? I should read more fics to find out for myself . Kudos to you!
Loli 7/5/07 . chapter 1
I want that lemon ;_; XD

You did a great job, very enjoyable.
Konous the grey 7/5/07 . chapter 1
Nicely done Hamsta, I figured when I saw the two new stories I was like 'Wait a minute, was there some team working going on here?'

I liked both of yours, the great thing is I don't have to review both for me to get the point across that I liked them.

Yay laziness succeeds!

No seriously, what I preferably think we need is perhaps dual set of epic stories written by the two of you, or better yet combine both worlds together, you write the WAFFy moments, he writes the dark and disturbingly arousing ones and it'll turn into an epic story the likes of which have never been seen.

What I'm try to say is...

I DEMAND MOAR!

-Konous
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