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| articuno13 2008-07-27 ch 4,  | abuseoh bummer, it's good! |
| Shadow-of-Roses 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuseI won't lie. I see a great plot, a wonderful writer and a sinking ship. I can see you have the potential to write one of the best FFVII stories out there, but you're not giving it your all. You started out so well, and now it seems like you are lacking. I can see in your writing that you can do better so next chapter I'll be expecting WAY more from you. |
| Twilight the Gecko 2008-05-26 ch 3, | abuseHa, messing with Reno's pretty fun! I gotta prank him in one of my stories soon...is that all of the story? |
| Hikari 2008-04-16 ch 4, anon. | abuseOdd humor but funny Meh I can't wait for Cloud's First Meeting And Did his outfit Change to all leather one to?. A Black Hair Cloud I think I can get use to that Idea So this Idea comes off from Crisis Core? well Genesis or Aerith make a show? but yeah Good Luck With This one it did remind me a little of Crisis Core with all the Wings at lest no Jenova yet...keep up the Good work now! |
| Jess.E.D. 2008-03-07 ch 4, | abusehehe thats so cool! cant wait for next chappii |
| Subaru 2008-01-09 ch 4, anon. | abuseBefore you go off on/in hiatus, could you please, pretty please fix chapter 2? *puppy dog eyes* It just...stops right in the middle. (Maybe s.th.'s wrong with FFNet...?) |
| Angel Crisis Eos 2008-01-03 ch 3, | abuseI am so lost but at the same time I so like ha Zack and Reno rock my socks please continue! Lamb |
| Angel Crisis Eos 2008-01-03 ch 2, | abuseCloud with black hair and demonic wings hm. Intersting so far but even if this is AU a bit and before all things went to hell Sephiroth seems ooc. Lamb |
| Angel Crisis Eos 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseHm I am a tad confused but none the less intersting though why does Cloud refer to hinself as nine years old. Lamb |
| "..." 2007-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseTo "Yet Another Flame Rising", I suggest you hold your tongue, there was need for that, practice before YOU preach, when I look at what you have written, I think YOU are pathetic, you are the one who has no life, do us all a favor, and keep your snide comments to yourself. To "City of Dis", I like your story, although it could use some improvement, however, I do hope you will update this story further, do not listen to what "Yet Another Flame Rising" has written. |
| GeneralSephiroth 2007-07-25 ch 2, | abuseO.o red hair... |
| Toons 2007-07-05 ch 2, | abuseJust checking...you didn't turn Cloud into a...Cloud/Zack criss cross right? Like how in the game Cloud thinks he's not real? I dunno I guess I'm slightly confused lol. I DO like the wings thing though. ;) |
| angel 2007-07-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseso this story is great! cant wait to read more i just hope sephiroth doesnt go insane |
| Chaos Nightbringer 2007-07-04 ch 1, | abuseWell, ole boy, not bad at all, a little short, but I shouldn't be the one to talk. So far not much of a story, so it's still a bit of a cofusing mess, but if you manage to get a new chapter up and actually start the story along, it will be great. I'm gonna guess you set this before Final fantasy VII, and leads up to the Burning of Nibelheim. You did capture a little bit of Hojo's psychoticness, which i have a little trouble with on story. Great start. |