I've always wanted to comment this story but I didn't have an account. -_-

But now I do ^_^ so yeah, this is pure genius! There's way too much Shiznat, not enough NatNao!

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Dude!! you've got to finish this fic... pleade dont abandon it!! >.< *stares at count-down-to-suicide with teary eyes* T~T this is such an awesome fic, and it needs continuation... I read all of the uploaded chapters in a day ^^" so PLEASE upload the rest of it soon.. I'm dying here lol. cant-wait-any-more... *dies of impatience* I will subscribe, and favourite you!! Now please continue with the story and dont abandon it... PLEASE! XD and I will love you forever ^_^

T_T I'm sad that you're not continuing this. I really enjoyed this fic, nonetheless. I love the idea of Natsuki/Tomoe. I think you just inspired me. xD

I'm liking this...it's intriguing and original, plus I'm a big nat x nao fan. I'm really feeling for Natsuki at the moment, she's so damaged and fragile. Can't wait to read more!

Well, while I am a little disappointed there is no new chapter, your doujin definitely makes up for it. I like how it's going so far, and can't wait until a new page. You draw very well ^_^

I'm am in no way a Natnao fan... Shiznat all the way... so you may wonder why I'm reading this at all. Well, I'm a writer and a reader... so it's always good to explore one's horizons.

I also don't belong to that fangirl section of the populace that you've referred to. I like Shizuru's dark side... it's part of what makes her so interesting, and so human too. And though I don't entirely agree with the way you've portrayed her... I do understand why you've done it that way.

I suppose there's not much about the story content that does appeal to me. Drugs, violence, abuse... and Natnao... nope nothing there that I like. :P However, it's well written and pretty compelling so I did read all the way through. I felt sad in all the right places and I still have a dull ache in my chest. *sniff* But that's perhaps because of the pairing again. ~_0 Okay, I'll drop that one. :P

I also checked out your doujin which was excellently done. I left a little comment too. I'd very much like to see more of that... even if it isn't part of my preferred fandom. ;)

First let me say your story is well written and I generally enjoyed reading it. I am ecstatic every time I come across a NaoxNat fic and Shizuru being portrayed as a bitch is a godsend indeed, but I am afraid your fic just feels somewhat...wrong. I can't really see Natsuki of all people crumbling because of some rumours or nearly all of her friends betraying her because of the mass hostility towards her. Or Natsuki getting beaten up by some random jerks, considering she kicked the crap out of those SEARRS soldiers in ep.15. Or the FUUKA Academy students body being so negative towards perceived lesbians...kind of doesn't add up with all the Shizuru fangirls and no one ever coming up with nasty rumours about Mai and Mikoto. ;) And the part where it was being decided whether to punish Nao and Natsuki - since Fumi is the headmistress now, seems to me the bastards who attacked Natsuki would get expelled because she would much rather trust Natsuki's word than theirs.
OK, this review got way too negative, so I will end it by saying I will continue following your story, as the good stuff in it far outweighs my feeling that things are not right in it. I hope for more emphasis on Nao later on.

P.S. Cooking scholarship? Good one! :)

'ELLO! Just manking a random reviwe cuz i really enjoy your story, oh pervert in the closet of guilty-ness! *bows* NE-ways, I just wanted you to know that i think you are doing a wonderful job at writing this Fic and i have been following it faithfully! *shifty eyes and pants* ... >.>'

Your most favorite reader? Aw, I'm honored to know you think of me as such! But how can I not leave a review after every chapter? This story is just so amazing! The way you portray the characters, and the plot so far is just awesome.
I seriously love reading this story, and am ecstatic whenever I see that you have updated ^_^
This chapter was wonderful; not only did it have smut (where Natsuki is seme; w00t!) but Nao is trying to get closer to Natsuki :D. Yet, Natsuki is going down that road of drug dependence/addiction. I really hope someone (Nao) can help her quit...is Nao going to find out what Natsuki is doing? I kinda have a feeling that she will...I wonder what her reaction will be; disgust, probably, to see someone who used to be so strong, fall so low.
Can't wait until the next chapter! :D

:B Not really. I have an annoying habit of calling people I admire Aniki. o.o; And as we all know means Big Brother in a sence. xD So there's my logic.

Nice chapter btw. :3?

As for me in real life... I tend to be very girly at times, but most of the time the tough girl. xD I threw a guy in the garbage for pissing me off once. :X (truestorybtw)

this is turning out very VERY good, I can't wait for each new chapter. Also you are one of the only people I know to actually give a more realistic reaction to what Shizuru did to Natsuki in the anime... "It's ok I forgive you" yeah right... even the people who wrote the anime made me mad with that. So thanks for writing something that makes sense as well as is good.

Wow... this is good. is really crazy recently... and I didnt know you've updated so many chapters already.

I am enjoying this. Keep up the great work!
btw... about the rape... was it Shizuru?
This piece has a huge potential to get really ansty. I just hope you don't overdo it and break my little heart. *grin*
(Shizuru x Natsuki x Nao x Tomoe x Mai?)
I mean... Mai's seemed PRETTY upset with Nao and Tate in relation to Natsuki... :P

I see ppl scold Tate ... but err... isn't Reito the person REALLY needed to be put to death here? *growl*

My fav line:
Or she could go with D. Which was "All of the above."
LOL. NICE.

o.o... ... ... wow...so druggy...I feel high just reading this LOL! ...i like how u portray Natsuki and how she's a total beyotch xD she doesn't get portrayed like an angsty teenager this well very often. so hats off to you! and I of course will continue to read because
1)super interesting story the use of drugs with Natsuki totally makes sense (DON"T DO DRUGS KIDS or you might end up beating the crap out of cheap whores like Tomoe...on the other hand...) xD it's good though.
2)Everyone's feelings are somewhat blunt, no annoying beating around the bush, Tomoe is a serious sex addict and does anything for it, well from Natsuki that is, Natsuki is a drug addict who will screw for drugs, Nao just plain out likes Natsuki, and Tate's a jerkhole LOL
3)u had the courage to write this in a public internet cafe... 8D I would have been totally paranoid if I did that, like checking around the corner and pretending to look at other things when people passed by LOL. congrats to you.
wow, long review, sorry, I tend to ramble when I come across something good ^^ please continue

This is really depressing. Jeez. Interesting though.

NU Natsuki! Drugs is not the the way! and fucking tomoe sure isn't either! LMAO I totally disapprove of the abusing of drugs, but not the fucking of Tomoe, please continue LOLZ, can't wait for the next angsty chapter xD