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| Angelic Gargoyle Artemis 2008-06-17 ch 7, | abuseAwesome story!! Please update soon! |
| morning sun 2008-04-01 ch 7, | abuseI read this story awhile ago, and I just found it again here on . I'm really enjoying this fic and I hope you continue soon, I'm loving where this is going and I can’t wait to read more. It’s really well written and has an interesting story line. Great job so far! Hope to see more soon, and Happy Typing! |
| Skymouth 2008-03-21 ch 7, | abuseThe whole popcorn scene just was too frigging cute! I've literally LOL'd several times throughout this fic. Mike's play-by-play of what was happening between Raph, April, and Casey was just... priceless! I love your prose! But you're an awful tease! Please, please let Raph and April finally get together! And don't forget the steamy details! Btw, you might like this pic I did of Raph/April http://skymouth. . I've become a fan of R/A a while back and have been searching for some good ones... this is definately going in my faves list! |
| brainfear 2008-03-17 ch 7, | abuseGood stuff! Can't wait for more! |
| storm 2008-03-04 ch 7, anon. | abuseI´m glad to see you returned. I liked the way you choose with this chapter. I hope you update soon. |
| Amy 2008-02-29 ch 7, anon. | abuseYay! Another chapter! I am really loving this story, but I need more! I hope to read more very soon. Thanks =) ~Amy |
| Amy 2008-02-18 ch 7, anon. | abuseHi Katie, I just wanted to say that I have really enjoyed this story, but the wait for the next chapter is killing me! Is there any chance the next chapter (or two) will be out soon? =) Thanks, Amy |
| RileySerenity 2008-01-31 ch 7, | abuseUtter gle~! You really need to write some more of this whenever you have time. Whether that time be a few minutes or an hour! No if's and's or but's about it missy! :3 |
| watchingpaintdry 2007-11-23 ch 7, | abuselove it...please please please continue |
| Vampire Toy 2007-10-30 ch 7, | abuseW.O.W That was just AMAZING. Its so well written and you've kept them in character too! Thanks so much for writing this! I can't wait for more |
| Col 2007-10-27 ch 7, anon. | abuseI really like this! Keep it up! =] |
| Lady Venom2 2007-10-23 ch 7, | abuseI'm still loving this story, I'm glad you're still updating it! I think you're getting the action/reactions between the two really well! Can't wait for more. |
| sunbune 2007-10-20 ch 7, | abuse"Nothing was forcing her to obey these laws, though, and the more she thought of it the more defiant she grew. Just take it slow, she told herself rationally. Take it slow." That's it, April, that's exactly the right attitude! I totally want to see a picture drawn of April kneeling by the sofa, looking up at Raph, just... contemplating. (aw! that was a really sweet moment.) Mikey on the phone was another highlight of this chapter. You got his voice perfect! And the idea of the crystal flower's new "veins" is very intriguing... can't wait to see what it all means! |
| Storm 2007-10-19 ch 7, anon. | abuseOH! I´m glad you updated! I hope I can read the next chapter soon. |
| soaringphoenix86 2007-10-16 ch 7, | abuseYeah, an update! Oh, and thanks for the clarification btw! But I'm afraid that more is needed...What happened to Raphael? Why was he unconscious on a roof for hours? And what happened to Casey? AND why does the flower he gave April now have "veins" running through it? I guess I'll have to wait and read the next chap, right? I loved the Raph/April moments in this chap, it's so cute to see Raph acting so (dare I say) shy around April! ^_~ LOL! I can only imagine what Raph's going to do when he gets back to the lair! I mean, after the initial round of questioning will he corner Mikey to find out what he really said to April or what? Raphael may be a lot of things, but being oblivious and/or forgetful is simply not his style! I can't wait for your next installment! Life's is always going to be hectic, so update when you can and know that I'll be looking forward to it! Faithfully, soaringphoenix86 |