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| Rat 2008-03-08 ch 4, | abuseYep, online banking is definitely the way to go. Great fic! |
| RhianaStar 2007-12-27 ch 4, | abuseJust found your story and I was so glad it was concluded I just couldn't put the laptop down... great story look forward to reading more... |
| alexisabove 2007-08-02 ch 4, | abuse"It was absolute chaos as people scrambled to the sides, desperate to avoid the spray of bullets as glass rained down on them. Dean moved instinctively in front of Sam who barely seemed to be aware of what was going on but nevertheless he grasped weakly at Dean’s shirt as he shielded him" I found that unbelievably adorable. I loved it!:) Great story!! One of my favs:D |
| pandora jazz 2007-07-31 ch 4, | abuseSorry for the late review, just got back from vacation. You did a great job with an injuried Sam and loved protective worried big brother Dean. My favorite moments as you wrapped up your story were - Dean and Sam trying to get each other to promise they would run if the other was caught by the police, because we know they won't leave each other. Than as an injuried Sam just trusted Dean to take care of his bullet wound. Great brother moment. Perfect ending as the brothers said "I love you" as only a Winchester can. Thanks for sharing your story with us. Until next time, take care. |
| rozzy07 2007-07-30 ch 4, | abuseOh I am so sorry I am late to the party with my reviews, but I can honestly say that yet again you have managed to weave together one fine story here. With consumate skill you seriously pimped LimpSam here dragging in tow a seriously angsty big brother in very uber-protective mode. And yes maybe next time with their history of banks - online banking may well be the safer option. Great story telling - with my apologies for my late input as this story was a delight to read. |
| whimseyrhodes 2007-07-29 ch 4, | abuseOh please oh please oh please tell me this isn't finished yet! Cause there can be so much more bro-angst with Sammy recovering, and maybe getting all feverish and stuff? huh huh huh huh? please??!? |
| Still Awesome2009 2007-07-28 ch 4, | abusegreat chapter, poor sam |
| sendintheclowns 2007-07-28 ch 4, | abuseThank you so much for the story! You definitely surpassed my expectations with this prompt. Thank you for working lots of limp into the fic. Angst and limp...what more could a girl ask for? |
| sendintheclowns 2007-07-28 ch 3, | abuseYou cliffed us! How could you leave Sam slumped against the wall with blood blossoming across his shirt? Good tension in this chapter. |
| sendintheclowns 2007-07-28 ch 2, | abuseYou've captured some vintage Dean here: “I heard gunshots, I wanted to see what was going on. It was boring outside.” Poor, concussed Sammy. And now the cops are outside! Wonder how the boys will get out of this one. |
| sendintheclowns 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseWhat a way to start the story -- with a bang! This was creepy good: 'Laura stood there staring blankly, a bullet hole through the centre of her forehead. She dropped to the floor with a muffled thump and all Sam could do was stare at her dead, glazed eyes.' I'm moving on to find out what happens next! |
| TammiTam 2007-07-27 ch 4, | abuseJust have to say, it was a great ending! But then again, I am a sucker for brotherly banter! Awesome story. |
| sammygirl1963 2007-07-27 ch 4, | abuseAwesome chapter! You had me on edge the whole time I was reading this chapter as I felt sorry for Dean because he was blaming himself for putting Sam in such a bad situation. And then for poor Sammy as he had to go thru the pain of having the bullet removed was just heartbreaking to read! Can't wait for your next chapter! |
| friendly 2007-07-27 ch 4, | abusegood job.. |
| IheartSam7 2007-07-27 ch 4, | abuseaw that was a great ending. |