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| SuGaRLiLy 2007-07-27 ch 1,  | abuseI do like your take on dear Odo's life, As a quick-footed, nimble young lad. The idea of him prancing 'round a large field Made me chuckle more than a tad. Sad was I to read of poor Odo's demise, All because of a creepy young bug. Odo had such skill, was such a promising youth! On my heartstrings it did tug. So I say 'Bravo' to you for this well-written tale, But I'm afraid I must say 'Ciao'!. You did Odo justice, we knew that he died, but you told us the 'why' and the 'how'! |
| InkandPaper 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuseHehe, I like your version -- the idea of Odo dying because he insulted a maggot is just too funny! :D * Oh, Odo the Oddball loved dancing too much For it sent the poor guy to his death If he had not yelled at the maggot from hell, He wouldn't then have breathed his last breath. What a sad way for a dancer to die, But it was really Odo own fault. He selfishly kept his dance-spot to himself, And so earned the old maggot's assault. |
| Ember Nickel 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abuseA short and sad story, and yet nonetheless Quite comical. Its rhymes unique It chronicles Odo, leaving no need to guess How he became a myth with mystique. |
| Sam 2007-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is going to be a waste of review but...Wow...Uh...No comment... |
| Dead-Luthien 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abuseCongratulation! Your poem is very funny and totally different from the others. You should know that you are now part of a C2 dedicated to odo's poems. Check it out. |
| Bagge 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abuseOdo the dancer, with smile and with hat Was a fellow as smashing as few The maggot, alas, was a grumpier sort And a most dangerous kind of foe The king of the meadow was thrown from his throne His bravado was to no avail But his story we sing, and to you - noble bard - I say Thanks for this Odoish tale |
| charlie brown 2007-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abusei think it's cool that you accually remembered the song. and tried to make it. it's very creative and original:) good job |