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| chipsnopotatoes 2007-07-08 ch 1, | abusecute! |
| laura sedai 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abuseVery good! The lyrics to that song actually remind me more of Tony and Michelle than Nadia and Doyle, but I can see how it relates to their situation as well. I also noticed that you don't seem to put punctation at the end of speech, which you should probably fix. Other than that, very well written. |
| Tigerlily Brown 2007-07-05 ch 1, | abuseGreat job!! Yet another awesome Doyle/Nadia story. I'm glad you wrote another one... and I can't wait for more. :D I can't help but notice that you took little things from other people's stories and stuck them into yours. (No offense or anything, I just noticed that...) |