Reviews for To Take What is Mine

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SMiNKLe 2008-07-01 ch 27,	abusei thoroughly enjoyed every scene between Xena and Gabrielle and the whole description of the war against Draco. I'm heartbroken that Xena and Gabrielle must go their separate ways. Those were also some scary nightmares in the story!! Also, I loved Faolan, RIP.. :( The coolest story within your fanfic was the part about Xena, Gabrielle, and Yakut being original amazons and how they were described as sky, earth, and forest and the meanings of each -- that will stick with me for a long time. :) Only thing I would suggest are fixing up some errors, but that would be wicked of me because your story is so long. Great job, nonetheless! -fav-
giasony 2008-06-10 ch 27,	abuseI just wanted to say thank you so much for all your hard work and an amazing story. I know I've written before, but I have a rule when I see something beautiful or corageous I have to say something. I know you wrote a little while ago about changing some of the circumstances to the plot so that you could publish it and I think that would be a great idea. As well, I just love your pace to the story and how you have made it so very character driven. There is a reason for everything. I'd like to hope that Seven will raise from the dead, and find happiness once again, but if not the twist was definately emotional and unexpected. The chemistry and trust between Xena and Gabrielle is truly romantic and each step between them well-earned. Again, thank you for all your hard work and for sharing it with the world.
Crying Faith 2008-06-10 ch 27,	abuseI loved To Find What is Mine and To Take What it Mine. I certainly hope the ending you chose is a signal for a trilogy. If it's not then I think the ending was rushed. You're an excellent writer and I look forward to reading more of your stories.
kahless21 2008-06-06 ch 27,	abuseWell is that an ending or a new begining. For an ending it really sucks. Killing the person you spent the last few chapters finding her humanity. keep up the good work.
ChickWithGuns 2008-05-28 ch 26,	abuseI only just recently discovered your stories “To Find What Was Mine” and “To Take What Is Mine”. They are bloody fantastic!! They held me tightly in their grasp… I couldn’t put them down (and now I have withdrawal syndrome cause this story is still in the making pout) Very well written. I love how you weave everything that has ever happened in the series into your tale. I find they are outstanding pieces of work! In this chapter I especially loved that moment where Gabrielle makes a move on Xena and she ends up turning her down. It combines all sorts of sentiments in one moment – lust, passion, love, frustration. Sweet! There are only few FanFiction stories out there who managed to get my attention – and foremost - keep my attention… Yours is one of them! Keep up the magnificent work.
HAZMOT 2008-05-26 ch 26,	abuseI'm so glad you are continuing this RED. I kinda thought that Seven of Nine had a past with Xena and I see the memories are more pronounced as she remains with the Amazons. I see that Xena is remembering her past for some reason, and I wonder why now, so close to meeting with Cyan. Gabrielle still cares and loves Xena and is willing to give her time to sort our their distances within the years Gabrielle never contacted Xena. But Xena still struggles with her Destroyer of Nation's past and I wonder going up against another enemy will induce that side again. This is so great and I'm taking the Holiday just to relax and read and savor my hubbies cooking. This was a treat for me and knowing how I like to relax with a good book or great story just compliments this for you. :D
HAZMOT 2008-05-12 ch 27,	abuseI'm glad you are shooting for the stars in making this a novel. But I'm bias, mainly because I've been a fan, and I think your stories were always destined to be famous. But, I want you to finish this one, in it's original manner. So, I'm being a little selfish in wanting you to finish this story. But, I'm always pleased to see you push yourself beyond the contstraints of just small stories and beleive me, I rather see you succesful in such a ongoing growth in literature. :D
niessa 2008-05-12 ch 27,	abuseI say go for it it's really a great story, one of the best fanfiction i ever read. Tough most of my favorite stories are from you. Can wait for an update!
Jaely 2008-05-11 ch 27,	abuseI would read it!
Dante Elric 2008-05-11 ch 27,	abusei don't mind if you change the names of the other characters as long as xena and gabby keep their names.
raptorial 2008-05-11 ch 27,	abuseplease finish the story, go ahead with the publishing, should be interesting reading terry
Amiko-Gabriel 2008-05-10 ch 27,	abuseI would finish this fic using the names as is, then, while being careful of legalities, consider writing an altered copy for yourself. Good luck! (and yes, this is an excellent fic!)
raptorial 2008-04-09 ch 26,	abusehi lillian stil good stuff keep it coming terry
kahless21 2008-04-08 ch 26,	abuseGreat job. Keep up the good work.
Dante Elric 2008-04-08 ch 26,	abusegreat great update i can't wait for the next also was that xena that killed the dude in sevens dream

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