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| Haruka-Hime 2008-08-11 ch 1,  | abuseGreat portrayal of Jubilee in a depressing situation - most people tend to either focus on her being happy or traumatized after Bastion. |
| fyre 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abusePowerful. I have always loved her character and while I nly look at comics infrequently now, I did search out the effects on Jubilee after House of M. I think your version is even more powerful and stunningly tragic than anything written by Marvel. Please write more. |
| SilentJubilee 2008-01-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked the ending-- well done. You didn't put the word 'that' in some of the sentences in the second paragraph of parallelism, so it threw me off a little. "Those who should care [that] she barely has enough money to cover the costs of living." Short, angry, but still in character. Nice details. |
| EmEx 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abusewow... short but so deep and true, so close to what I believe, many of us felt when Jubes was left there without nothing. Curse those X-Men! |
| Fionn the Otaku 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good. |
| Jubes2681 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abuseWow - an amazing story as always, DevDev. Great portrayal of Jubilee in a depressing situation - most people tend to either focus on her being happy or traumatized after Bastion. I think you've done a great job in showing her personality as it's meant to be written. I'd love to see it continue, but it's also great as a one-shot. ~PAFF~ Jubes |
| Professor Horatio Hufnagel 2007-07-05 ch 1, | abuseWow! Excellent! I loved this oneshot! Very clever. Your title caught my attention, and the writing even more so. Jubes is such a vibrant being, and to see her broken in a way like this is so touching... and you approached it just as I thought she would have expressed her feelings. Very very good! |