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IlovetowriteSMP
2008-03-10
ch 23,
abuseLoved the reunion! Aw.
IlovetowriteSMP
2008-03-10
ch 22,
abuseLoved how Bess led him to her.
IlovetowriteSMP
2008-01-31
ch 21,
abuseYAY! She's back.
IlovetowriteSMP
2008-01-31
ch 20,
abuseI like these lines:
It doesn't say Martin on the detective office door for nothing ya know! All he needed was a little encouragement.
IlovetowriteSMP
2008-01-31
ch 19,
abuseAfter allowing Jenny to open her mouth, Will reached over, gave her a kiss, and embraced his trembling girlfriend.

AW, so cute!
IlovetowriteSMP
2007-11-19
ch 18,
abuseGlad to see you updated. Great chapter! This story is so unique- a one of a kind.
IlovetowriteSMP
2007-09-28
ch 17,
abuseThe aiden and tad convo was LOL funny. The JR part was so sweet and something I could totally see him doing.
IlovetowriteSMP
2007-09-24
ch 16,
abuseWow, its getting really exciting now. I can't wait to see what happens next.
chicgirl
2007-09-09
ch 1,
abusehey nice fic click on my homepage and join my board. we have a amc section where you can post your fic for more reviews.
IlovetowriteSMP
2007-09-05
ch 14,
abuseLOL at this whole part
I was run off the road by my ex, even though now the son of a ** is totally denying it ever happened. How about you?"

"Um, Food poisoning."

"Ick, what a way to go."

"Tell me about it."

"So, I'm supposed to be waking up from a coma any day now. "

"A coma? You don't look like someone who's been asleep the past few years. I mean, your hair is perfect."

Very creative!
IlovetowriteSMP
2007-09-05
ch 13,
abuseSeeing Bess is so cute! Love that.
IlovetowriteSMP
2007-09-05
ch 12,
abuseOh I see, ha ha, David is the new soap character from the show he went to after AMC. LOL. Great twist.
IlovetowriteSMP
2007-09-05
ch 11,
abuse"I found out my uncle has been keeping Dixie on life support all this time."

Wow I love that twist.

Wonder why David thinks he has a different last night. Looking forward to finding out.
IlovetowriteSMP
2007-08-16
ch 10,
abuseLove seeing Jenny and Will working together. And all the Simone and Ethan stuff- they are so cute together. LOL at that line about Greenlee being Greenlee- so true.
IlovetowriteSMP
2007-08-11
ch 9,
abuseI really liked the Jenny/will interaction in this chapter. The bickering and then working together was a lot of fun to read. I still really enjoy the fact Will has such a big role in this fic.
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