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FireChildSlytherin5
2009-03-15 . chapter 10
Love the story. Nice plot. :)
Paradox Man
2008-08-02 . chapter 8
Anyone but me notice how the second half of the battle(Aang vs Azula) seemed a LOT like Avatar Aang vs Ozai with the whole "Aang walks away, lightning goes ZEWM, he spins around, and then someone gets pwned" part.
Luiz4200
2008-02-09 . chapter 10
Wow. That time skip surprised me. Good job.
Vimuku
2008-02-04 . chapter 10
WAH so cute! ^_^ nice happy ending for everybody! horay!

liked the ending for this one, short and sweet ^_^
superkawaiifoxy
2008-02-04 . chapter 10
oh such a cute way to end it all!
KitKat1327
2008-02-03 . chapter 10
nice ending!
Luiz4200
2008-01-30 . chapter 9
Please update. I'm willing to see this epilogue and the next Zutara story you've announced.
Dragon Jadefire
2008-01-28 . chapter 9
Ozai was only Fire Lord for about six years.
Vimuku
2008-01-28 . chapter 9
ah what a happy ending ^_^ so much happened...

Zuko gets his body back, he's reunited with Iroh, Katara tries to beat the ** outta him, and he's now welcomed to the family!! ^_^ whe!

plus he becomes the Fire Lord to boot!

Can't wait to read the epilogue ^_^ and i'll be waiting for that next Zutara!
Vimuku
2008-01-21 . chapter 8
(Bows down to the awesomeness that is YOU)

dang, she died... wow... that must've sucked... but i guess she sorta deserved it for sorta killing katara and really ** off Aang xD

oh yeah i'd love to beta that *wink wink nudge nudge* story ^_^ sned it to me whenever ^_^

anyway this chapter had a lotta action ^__^ very fun to read and very interesting ^_^

OMG THAT'S WHERE IROH WAS! JEEZ I THOUGHT HE GOT KIDNAPPED OR SOMETHING! DUN WORRY ME LIKE THAT! man that old geezer falling asleep in a hot spring xD sounds just like him ^_^

can't wait to read the final chapter ^_^ and i'll be waiting for that beta!
Luiz4200
2008-01-21 . chapter 8
Yes, you should put this Zutara up. About this chapter, I liked seeing Zuko isn't so insensitive. Please update.
bLaHBuR
2008-01-17 . chapter 7
AH..eh...i cant tell who the last person is...man i suck ^^ lol anyhoo very nice turn of events and lovely how toph can sense people its like a watch dog dude lol dang i didnt know toph like sokka i didnt really think she was the falling in love type more of the making fun of type lol =P
bLaHBuR
2008-01-17 . chapter 6
YAY zuko has been reunited with his body, but too bad he cant go back huh? lol anyhoo iroh is really nice here O.o...lol but he is a kool ojiisan so meh. i felt so sad when iroh was looking at zuko's body with such pain T_T i love how they care about each other so much ^^ lol
bLaHBuR
2008-01-17 . chapter 5
thats funny how aang can feel it and yells stop then again i think i might feel like im going crazy too if i were him. but hey hes the avatar he has to deal with it right? thats interesting how katara will be watching from now on, but still zuko sure is nice not to see her naked body and bathe with clothes on. then again he probably does that for his own benefit. ^^
bLaHBuR
2008-01-17 . chapter 4
toph is so nice! YAY TOPH! okies well i didnt expect toph to help, but i did expect her to be the first one to find something was weird with katara (zuko) so yeah ^^ no surprise there. the beginning was super funny i love how toph threw the ball like that on purpose LMAO! but aang kinda creaped me out there Oo...dang man talk about majorly showing it lol
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