Reviews for A Red Fox and A Yellow Flash

Byakugan789 2007-09-24 ch 1,	abusenice...alittle short but well done.
EverlastingBliss 2007-07-05 ch 1,	abuseYou did a good job of portraying what could have happened. I like your writing style and descriptive language. About RabidGaaraFan's comment on how the fight should have been longer, I don't really agree. In the anime, we see the Yondaime seal the Kyuubi right away when he arrived. Besides, I think he is smart enough to know that nothing else except the Sealing Jutsu would work against the demon. Once again, good job. :) (This is the longest review I ever wrote, seriously. XD)
A Bibliophile 2007-07-05 ch 1,	abuseI think you did a good job portraying how it probably happened. However, I think that the battle should have gone on longer and it was only as a last resort that the hokage sealed him in Naruto. Also, from what I have watched and read, i think the hokage thought out what would happen a little more and did not just do it on a spur of the moment thing. You have a real good writing style though...