Love this chapter! Very sweet! Can't wait to see what the Trio (Stinkie in particular) does to Fionna for revenge!

Sweetness! XD Can't wait for the new chapter!

I loved this chapter! You know how I am about CasperXKat! How sweet, that he is always there for her and to support her...

Still a little sad about Dr. Harvey and the state he is in. Perhaps the Lazarus will once again bring him back...or Amelia...? Can't wait for the next chapter!

NO!

THIS CANNOT BE HAPPENING! SAY IT ISN'T SO, MELLE! SAY IT ISN'T SO!

:o Oh no!

update soon .

Wow! All I can say is...wow! Oh...what Dr. Harvey said to Casper was so beautiful! And you call me a good writer--that was great writing!--how you can switch gears from the way the Uncles speak to Dr. Harvey--great job! I have a hard time with the characters--they all sound the same when they speak. Yours don't--very much in character.

OMG--poor Melle! Oh...that Fionna...

This story is excellent, to make you feel so many emotions...well-done! Can't wait for the next chapter!

OMG...my hand was on my mouth when that ghost-twit blew up the house--I thought Rin was dead! And--oh--I am on pins and needles--Stretch was talking about how Stinkie lost his vocal gift--I just KNOW it! I can't wait to find out how...and what this had to do with Melle/Emma. Wow! Great drama--great chapter! Can't wait for the next update!

hey girl! you work like a machine, did you know? (spanish compliment) hehehehe
I think I know why you have a little problem to continue now. First, you have wrote a lot in a short time, and second, you usually divide more the action in separated tramas.
Is a result of the speed up. Aynway, I Love it, I love it I love it!
*hugs*

Oh...I'd like to run to Whipstaff right now and kick Fionna's butt! She is nothing but poison--and she sank to a new level now that she has harrassed poor Azriel. I hope he tells his father and Stinkie throws that no-good piece of work out the door! This is really good, love Azriel's character and Rin is good for him! Also LUV what Casper said about Kat, and how you haven't forgotten about their relationship, either. Great job! This is really exciting--you adding almost a chapter a day now--and me reading them everyday! Keep it up!

Oh...Stretch was so sweet to Azriel and Rin in this chapter--love it, love him...and I LOVED how he put Fionna in her place! Whew! NO ONE walks all over Stretch! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh, this is so cute! I loved how Azriel went after Fiona with a vacuum cleaner--served her right! Rin is very cool--she's a voudoun. I love New Orleans, I visit there all the time, and voodoo is practiced there and it is very interesting, its history and all. Is she from New Orleans? Can't wait for the next chapter.

Hey! I am so happy you updated this! This is so good, and this chapter is pretty sad, and the drama and tension are written very well! I liked the conflict between Azriel and his Dad--it will be interesting to see what will happen later with their relationship. Great job!

I love it!
Fiona's gonna get pwn'd tho...
by MELLE! :)
that would rawk!
and more Stretch/Ghastly :) pwease

Yay! But we need more Casper and Kat...

Wo! Keep 'em comin'!