hmm is there going to be more? More chaptres to this story? I really like this story.

If you reply to reviews, can you please tell me if Kaye or Roiben are mentioned? And tell me the actual ships. This book seems intriguing enough to start reading.

Interesting. Throws canon straight out the window, but good nonetheless. Definitely liked the ending.

Ani

yay, this is good .

OMG. Brilliant. I never thought of Ruth loving her. It's a brilliant idea, and it makes total sense. Yes. *just woke up and is probably not going to give very coherent reviews at the moment*

TALLY BEAT ME TO IT D:

Which is okay because I beat her to it last time, and it's cool really, because it's not a contest. Or rather, it shouldn't be. But then it always is, only because WE LOVE YOU SO MUCH.

And like, you've already heard what I think of this. :3 If I ever write a fantasy novel, I'd name a guy Valluis just for kicks. ;D

Only my inner canon-wh0re is going "NAW, BXTCH. LUIS LOVES CORNY. VAL GETS HOT FOR TROLLS," but yeah.

And homg, I have to take pictures of the henna crap I drew all over my hands xD; It's actually pretty fricken cool. I took some home too and drew on my mom's feet. It's fun. :D

XDXD First review? Yay.

I still just squee over your first line. 'Ruth loves Val.' So cute. So damn cute.

And Val's basic description of Luis too. And how it's simply 'Ruth sees him' - not going into depth about who it is, just stating the facts, and no stupid introductions between them that would probably just be awkward.

Aand short review, because I already responded.

[yay the ending was cropped]

I love it. I would still have loved it - come on, a triangle? - if you'd left the ending there, but I admit I love it maybe more the way it is.