Wow. This was an intense, REAL portrayal of the two of them and the anger and the truth that had been lying under it all. I loved this tale and the way you just wove the words together into cold, hard, gritty reality with the gloss of something wonderfully more. Thanks, Nessie. This was amazing.

Squee :3.

Very cute. I was hoping for a little more action between Pyro and Kitty though.

If only you'd continue v_v;;.

Haha, I have such a happy smile on my face. I love Kyro, and this was really well written and amazing! Thank you!

This was recommended on one of the kyro communities on lj, and boy, am I glad I read it.

Extremely well written and a good combination of movieverse and the marvel event and not confusing at all.

A lovely ending - loved how you resolved (kinda) everything.

great job XD

That was wonderfully written.

Wow! This was just fantastic! I enjoyed it so much!

I loved how you wrote Kitty and John, and it was just brilliant!

Well done!

Oh, that was just brilliant. It's not confusing at all, just extremely well-written and simply beautiful. Thanks so much for sharing! :D

I got the link from Vi's journal, and ah I'm glad I decided to have a read! This was wonderfully written! I loved it. You wrote John and Kitty incredibly well. D Well done!

I...love you.

Like WHOA.

Seriously, Ness, my brain has short-circuited and this is just so awesome and full of WIN.

The concept for this is great, too...I think you did a fab job of blending the comic- and movieverse.

You have totally made my night! ILU!