Reviews for The O'Neill Twins

Reviews For: The O'Neill Twins

Maethoriell 2008-05-20 ch 1,	abuseInteresting idea here ^.^ I can't say much as for constructive criticism; It's well written, it has promising subject matter, I just hope you still plan on updating >.< ..It's been over a year since you last updated so I have a somewhat justifiable fear of that. It's a good story so far, of course I want more..
Boleyn 2008-04-11 ch 1,	abuseGreat chap and idea, poor Jack and John, please continue with this story.
Dnic5 2007-12-21 ch 1,	abuseI love it and hope that you continue this story some time soon.
peppymint 2007-09-28 ch 1,	abuseBreath, must breath. Great job, I haven't laughed so hard in ages.
Firehedgehog 2007-07-11 ch 1,	abusesnickers.. please please continue
senpai chan 2007-07-08 ch 1,	abuseYay (confetti) I love this story! The two O'Neil's crack me up so much. Keep writing sis! Oh, and did I mention my love of exclaimation point!! OO __ { } Ack! Alien attack! Flee! Call the Asgard... (Senpai has been sucked up into the mother ship and will review again later.. Beep)
WBH21C 2007-07-06 ch 1,	abuseGreat start!
Allen Pitt 2007-07-06 ch 1,	abuseGeez...even if they're brought back up to teen-dom, still not so good. Looks like O'Neill is out of the SGC... I suppose then they're "twins" and have to go to school together in Sunnydale? *The SGC show does have a weird tendency to show the characters totally forgetting about people they should care about--Cassie not being at the funeral for Janet Frasier, the Jack O' clone never being shown again, and so on... (if the O'Neills go to Sunnydale, you should send Cassie there, too... and maybe be a Potential?) -- hm, the 'twins' when fighting would probably make a great team as they know exactly how each will react... I wonder if Jack has a secret stash of high tech ... zats & the like? Or if Thor gives him some 'stuff' as compensation?

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