wow i wonder what will happen next, this is getting very interesting.

Interesting story line, I must say. Not many have tried this, if any. Keep it up!

I wonder why this story never got reviews... -_-
I honestly think this is a great start, and the Larxene being pregnant thingy being really new. I only have one thing to ask, how are they going to hide her belly as she gets 'bigger' through the months? Say that 'she's just getting fatter' excuse?
Ya'know, this the first story in awhile that actually has Axel and Larxene fighting over if they love each other and ending in still saying they don't love each other. (I don't think that made sense...)
Update soon!

wow this is a very interesting story very well done update soon please!!