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Chibi Tenshi Sama
2008-04-15
ch 1,
abuseThat's so mean... but very funny. (Lolz, coming out of the closet...)

Keep up the good work!

~Angel
ChibiVampireRene
2008-02-02
ch 1,
abuse0.o, poor Anzu, her boyfriend is screwing her bestfriend behind her back, in closets to apparently XD. Lol, i liked this storey, it was funny and very original. Huh, i have never heard of that song you mentioned before...
Well done, yugi is quite dark isn't he?
-Serenitysfaith
dragonlady222
2008-01-23
ch 1,
abuseCute and hot story.
SetoKaiba'sShowGirl
2007-10-07
ch 1,
abuseThat was great. i loved it. i mean i love that song "Scotty Dosent Know" so i decicded to read it. i can honestly tell you i thought i want gonna like it but i did. it going on my favourites.

Favourite Bit:

“Screw Anzu,” Atemu muttered, on his knees and nuzzling closer, kissing Yugi’s navel as if it were his sweet little mouth.

Yugi managed a sardonic smirk. “Yes… that’s… that’s what you should be doing…” he panted, running his hands endlessly though Atemu’s luxurious locks. “But here I am instea—a!”

Koi,

SetoKaiba'sShowGirl
yamisangel101
2007-08-20
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this fic... great job. :D
dragonrider713
2007-08-17
ch 1,
abuseYou're right. I will never be able to listen to that song without thinking of this. Great story.
Hime no Ichigo
2007-08-13
ch 1,
abuseOh, naughty naughty~! *groans in appreciation* Dirty!Yuugi is often so interesting to read...I just can't, for the life of me, -write- dirty!Yuugi though. Oh well, it's nice to see others who write it well though. *_*

And, poor Anzu. *smirks* Albeit I don't really feel that, hee!

Favouriting!
The Second Coming
2007-07-19
ch 1,
abuseDelightful! Though, *highly* unfair to Anzu. Still, cute ficlet! Thanks for sharing.

-- The Second Coming.
MissHaunted-MoonLight
2007-07-19
ch 1,
abuseOh, sexy naughtiness is so fantabulous when it's Yami and Yugi who are involved. They just pull it off so wonderfully. Bless them.

Brilliant! I love it! You've got quite a talent, dear. Most certainly! ;)

Keep on writing!
Blessed Be!
Peanut x X x
EclipseValkyrie
2007-07-13
ch 1,
abuseI. Love. This!

It was sexy, funny and completely ... WOW. AMAZING!
You are god!
Egypt Motou
2007-07-07
ch 1,
abusethis was really good you should continue with this, it would turn out to be a very good story, Atemu and Yugi hiding the secret from Anzu, and having to keep their secret feeling a secret oh I'm anxious already, seriously you should continue this, even if it was meant to be a one shot, it would turn out really well, I'd surely read it if you did well a bid you a farewell (bows respectively) Ja ne for now
SublimeEspoir
2007-07-06
ch 1,
abuseBrilliant. I love twisted stories. You should carry this on. Seriously. Loved it!
kingleby
2007-07-06
ch 1,
abuselove it ^_^
Liu Barrowin
2007-07-06
ch 1,
abuseNicely done! I enjoyed this story.
yami-hikari lover13
2007-07-06
ch 1,
abuseThe closet...the make-out...the little Secret. OH! It's so Scandalous! I so love it!
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