 Mirage992 2009-06-17 . chapter 5What a pleasant surprise to see this story being updated!!
Very well written and adorable to boot! Good job!
Please update soon!
~Mirage992 |
 Silvery Mist 2009-06-14 . chapter 5Cute story. I loved the parts with Black Hayate's POV. :) |
 RoyxRizaFan 2009-06-14 . chapter 5Aw, FINALLY! XD Awesome fan fic! Everyone was really IC! Great job! |
 Everystep 2009-06-13 . chapter 5Aw, that was nice ^^ great job! |
 I Am The 1st Anonymous 2009-06-13 . chapter 5Aw, that was so perfect! I was thinking how you'd say something about how Roy thought Riza would make a good mom, when he saw her feeding the ducks with the girl. But oh well, you can be original. :) |
 Rissy 2009-06-13 . chapter 5 Absolutely brilliant =) And I love Pride and Prejudice, but nobody else here in Aussieland has seen that alternative ending! XD So cute =) I loved the bits from the dog's perspective =) My puppy is a tiny 6-month-old thing and he's so powerful! HE walks YOU. I would be terrified to walk a larger dog! XD |
 JoPo08 2009-06-13 . chapter 5OMG! This is so wonderful! I regret saying my last review, THIS ONE is even better! My guess is that they will all be better than the last! |
 JoPo08 2009-06-13 . chapter 4Ah, loved this chapter the most so far.
Keep going, PLEASE? |
 JoPo08 2009-06-13 . chapter 3YAYYAYYAY! I love this! And, I usually am not a huge fan of all of the RoyRiza stuff... |
 JoPo08 2009-06-13 . chapter 2Nice one. Very different perspective. |
 JoPo08 2009-06-13 . chapter 1I have, very much so! |
 Deniece 2009-06-13 . chapter 5A picnic date with a bunch of body guards around, what a romantic occasion! Nice thing you didn't fight the fic getting longer and longer... it flows naturally like this. And grown Elicia! I like her being pictured like this, going to school and being other than 3-year-old cute infant. |
 YourLifeInWords 2009-06-13 . chapter 5Amazing cute.
Love it. |
 MoonStarDutchess 2009-06-13 . chapter 5Loved it! I was in the mood for some fluff and you delivered 100 percent. This was extremely adorable. Wonderful writing as always. |
 jacksparrow589 2009-06-13 . chapter 5 Oh, Hayate's such a smart little doggie! My neighbor's cat just comes over and jumps in my lap whenever he pleases. No manners whatsoever.
3.5k isn't short, sure, but this was well worth reading, anyway. All those little parts were definitely neccessary to make it what it is. I'm glad you stuck with it all!
Chris and the girls with Roy in the flower shop was awesome. I don't think Chris will EVER stop calling him "Roy-boy"; it's way too much fun!
Poor Riza at the end, though. Roy needed to make a pretty quick turnaround there, but he didn't quite get that at first. Yay for happy endings and thus, happier beginnings! |