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Angel.Of.Allure
2009-11-20 . chapter 5
Aww, this is sweet. I love the flowers and their meanings.
Mirage992
2009-06-17 . chapter 5
What a pleasant surprise to see this story being updated!!

Very well written and adorable to boot! Good job!

Please update soon!

~Mirage992
Silvery Mist
2009-06-14 . chapter 5
Cute story. I loved the parts with Black Hayate's POV. :)
RoyxRizaFan
2009-06-14 . chapter 5
Aw, FINALLY! XD Awesome fan fic! Everyone was really IC! Great job!
Everystep
2009-06-13 . chapter 5
Aw, that was nice ^^ great job!
I Am The 1st Anonymous
2009-06-13 . chapter 5
Aw, that was so perfect! I was thinking how you'd say something about how Roy thought Riza would make a good mom, when he saw her feeding the ducks with the girl. But oh well, you can be original. :)
Rissy
2009-06-13 . chapter 5
Absolutely brilliant =) And I love Pride and Prejudice, but nobody else here in Aussieland has seen that alternative ending! XD So cute =) I loved the bits from the dog's perspective =) My puppy is a tiny 6-month-old thing and he's so powerful! HE walks YOU. I would be terrified to walk a larger dog! XD
JoPo08
2009-06-13 . chapter 5
OMG! This is so wonderful! I regret saying my last review, THIS ONE is even better! My guess is that they will all be better than the last!
JoPo08
2009-06-13 . chapter 4
Ah, loved this chapter the most so far.
Keep going, PLEASE?
JoPo08
2009-06-13 . chapter 3
YAYYAYYAY! I love this! And, I usually am not a huge fan of all of the RoyRiza stuff...
JoPo08
2009-06-13 . chapter 2
Nice one. Very different perspective.
JoPo08
2009-06-13 . chapter 1
I have, very much so!
Deniece
2009-06-13 . chapter 5
A picnic date with a bunch of body guards around, what a romantic occasion! Nice thing you didn't fight the fic getting longer and longer... it flows naturally like this. And grown Elicia! I like her being pictured like this, going to school and being other than 3-year-old cute infant.
YourLifeInWords
2009-06-13 . chapter 5
Amazing cute.
Love it.
MoonStarDutchess
2009-06-13 . chapter 5
Loved it! I was in the mood for some fluff and you delivered 100 percent. This was extremely adorable. Wonderful writing as always.
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