What a pleasant surprise to see this story being updated!!

Very well written and adorable to boot! Good job!

Please update soon!

~Mirage992

Cute story. I loved the parts with Black Hayate's POV. :)

Aw, FINALLY! XD Awesome fan fic! Everyone was really IC! Great job!

Aw, that was nice ^^ great job!

Aw, that was so perfect! I was thinking how you'd say something about how Roy thought Riza would make a good mom, when he saw her feeding the ducks with the girl. But oh well, you can be original. :)

Absolutely brilliant =) And I love Pride and Prejudice, but nobody else here in Aussieland has seen that alternative ending! XD So cute =) I loved the bits from the dog's perspective =) My puppy is a tiny 6-month-old thing and he's so powerful! HE walks YOU. I would be terrified to walk a larger dog! XD

OMG! This is so wonderful! I regret saying my last review, THIS ONE is even better! My guess is that they will all be better than the last!

Ah, loved this chapter the most so far.
Keep going, PLEASE?

YAYYAYYAY! I love this! And, I usually am not a huge fan of all of the RoyRiza stuff...

Nice one. Very different perspective.

I have, very much so!

A picnic date with a bunch of body guards around, what a romantic occasion! Nice thing you didn't fight the fic getting longer and longer... it flows naturally like this. And grown Elicia! I like her being pictured like this, going to school and being other than 3-year-old cute infant.

Amazing cute.
Love it.

Loved it! I was in the mood for some fluff and you delivered 100 percent. This was extremely adorable. Wonderful writing as always.

Oh, Hayate's such a smart little doggie! My neighbor's cat just comes over and jumps in my lap whenever he pleases. No manners whatsoever.

3.5k isn't short, sure, but this was well worth reading, anyway. All those little parts were definitely neccessary to make it what it is. I'm glad you stuck with it all!

Chris and the girls with Roy in the flower shop was awesome. I don't think Chris will EVER stop calling him "Roy-boy"; it's way too much fun!

Poor Riza at the end, though. Roy needed to make a pretty quick turnaround there, but he didn't quite get that at first. Yay for happy endings and thus, happier beginnings!