 twilightpath 2008-01-26 . chapter 1... ... ... *stabs Nanba plushie with poisoned dagger* DIE! DIE, YOU FOO! You don't deserve poor Nakao. *glances at Nakao* *Nakao: still crying his poor little heart out* DIE!! FOO!!
Anyways... You are awesome. Super emphasis on the "awesome" part. Now I really want to go to wherever that playboy's living and slap that grin offa his face! |
 Luny Lady 2008-01-06 . chapter 1Aw, this makes me want to give Nakao a big hug! Very nicely done -sniffle- |
 esther 2007-12-17 . chapter 1 argh so well written damnit (wipes tears from eyes) i hate this situation. poor nakao. in the drama he's actually quite cute and sweet. and nanba sempai is FINE. ^_^
i wish that somehow things could work out between these two. but yeah, great job writing nakao and maybe you could write some more nakao x nanba?? pretty please? ^_^ |
 Mentally Insane Fangirl 2007-11-24 . chapter 1Awh, that was so sad. The ending was perfect. |
 Dark Queen Anime 99 2007-09-18 . chapter 1This story was very good. Poor Nakao. I love that guy so much. XD |
 Tiamath 2007-08-07 . chapter 1An exquisitely written look at the boy behind the brat. Beautiful work! |
 shy-hinata 2007-07-13 . chapter 1I thought this story was really well crafted, and did a great job of portraying what poor Nakao must be going through. I really love Hana Kimi too, and you're right that the 'background' characters sometimes have the most personality. I think Kayashima is one of my favourites.
Anyway, I really enjoyed this story! Great job! |
 ILoveJoren 2007-07-07 . chapter 1I love it! This is so cool!
YESS! I love Kayashima and Kadoma too!! And not to forget, poor "gay" Nakatsu!!
Do you mind if you drop by my fanfic?? I'm not sure if you read Tamora Pierce fan fic, but if you do, drop by yea? And I'm going to upload a Hana-Kimi fan fic soon, so if I do, will you drop by and give me some advice or comment?
Thanks and keep up the good work!! Double- no, triple- THUMBSUP! |
 Sologirl102 2007-07-07 . chapter 1Fantastic! Nakao's my favorite character (and Minami/Nakao is my favorite pairing), and there aren't enough fics about him. His personality during the books was delicious, especially his avid pursuit of a freaked out but oblivious Minami. It's nice to see a soft side, or at least an aware side to Nakao, meaning he knows it won't ever happen, but he hopes... and never cries in public about it. I just want to glomp him, then help him plot a way to get Nanba! Please keep writing more about Nakao please! |
 Tayk 2007-07-07 . chapter 1Love it.
Love, love, love, love, love.
Nakao is one of my favorite Hanazakari characters. Well, and Kadoma... and Rio. And - -shuts up now-
But seriously,
hearts everywhere.
I'm a total fan of in-depth insight into any character. It helps that you can write so well.
As usual, there's a ton more that I want to say but no words to say it with and I'm making an idiot of myself by trying. So I'll just tell you that I loved your story. Tons.
Thanks so much for writing this!
-Tayk- |
 Jaela-chan 2007-07-06 . chapter 1Oh my goodness, a Hana-Kimi fic! From you! I am so happy right now.
It was darling. I've always had this soft spot for poor Nakao. You can't really blame him for being bratty, right? He's been in this situation for SO long. The poor dear.
He made a really lovely girl, didn't he? I kept wishing Nanba wouldn't be so cold.
Incidentally, my favorite Hana-Kimi pairing is Nakatsu x Mizuki. There's so much tragically unrequited love in Hana-Kimi! It's so sad! Poor Nakao... and Nakatsu... and even Umeda-sensei!
Anyway, as sad as this was, it was another piece of gorgeous writing from you. You really have a way of capturing the characters authentically, while at the same time making them your own. It's nice to read something of yours for the first time in a while. (smile) |