I like it! It's sad. Good job!

This was great, really freaky, esp. for 500 words. I'm impressed.

Oh, gives one the shivers, excellent imagry.

wow, this is potent. it really makes an impression. and it leaves off well too :D

Great short story! ALMOST as good as a prisoner of evil:if the boy who lived was taken!

kewl

Melodramatic. Only word. I saw your story recommened then recognised your name as one of my reviers-I can't e-mail you so this'll have to do. Your review of Phoenix Tears set me off on a new course-writing 'Phoenix Tears' without the Elemental in a new fic 'Pawn of Darkness'...thanks for an extra few hours of writing bliss-Silvermane

I loved it! *Adds to favorites*

spooky dream

What a pile of extremely, suffocatingly, absolute CRAP!