Wow...That really fits their personalities...Awesome fic!

Wow. You know something? I've been reading the stories that I understand of your's, and I'm incredibly impressed. I mean, yes, they're all fluff, but they're so real... And in character too. ^^
You've got a wicked sense of humor, and I adore it to peices. But, I would like to see more things that aren't KH... lol. Forgive me, but I just can't follow them. I've never been much of a gamer.
Anyway, brilliant fluff. Absolutely. ^^

well i really fxcking loved it
however weird it was.

nice writing.

ahah! i read the book.

this is so incharacter, its wicked.

XD *dies* I read Vendy and Broomy and was like 'whothefxck?' and then I remembered/realised. Oh, I feel like a dork.

First point - this is plot. It's not advancing plot, but it is plot nonetheless and probably one of the most awesomest ideas I have ever seen.

wowzuh XDD your valiant writing gets more crazier every time ahaha. ish awesome.

— but they're all sort of relieved, you know, when the sun rises without incident.

perfect ending ;]
andwow, so manymore in your profile
keep writing!! >:3

I am so horrible when it comes to reviewing you & Tally's HB fic. So here I am now. >D

Okay, this is such a unique idea to use. I love it. Lolli glamoring vines up the side of the building so they can climb even though they aren't technically climbing because there aren't technically vines there. It's so cool.

I love how Dave goes up next to see up Lolli's skirt and how cynical Val is about the whole thing and Luis being the one who ends up saving Lolli and I love the fairytale concept as a whole. That one paragraph using it was my favorite.

But, I think my favorite lines are the last ones and this one:

“Where’s the fucking catch?” says Val.

Because it just seems like something Val would ask, like something anyone would ask, high out of their mind or not. XDXD

*FAVE'D*

Goddamn it. You better be online. >D

Plot? Who said anything about plot? Things like this don't HAVE to have plot. In fact, the less plot, the more effective, if that makes sense. No, plot is not the point of this sort of thing.

And Lolli's line is just brilliantly ironic, because hello! She's hardly one to be calling others crazy. XD

Ugh. I have run out of compliments to give. You're exceptionally talented, and that's that.