Omgosh I ADORE this story and I adore how Zim tries so hard to keep his friendships alive at all costs because he's always been a selfish brat, and I adore Dib and how old bits of himself still leak over to Blue, and I adore how the irkens love Blue, and I adore how Zim's actually grown a little bit smarter because of Blue and how they complement each other so well.

I sort of half-want Dib to find out who he is and half not, because when Dib finds out what Zim did to him, there's going to be hell to pay. It's like knowing a car-crash is going to happen and hoping both of them survive it. But at the same time, if Dib knew who he was - he would make a beautiful revolutionary.

This is turning out really well. You have some spelling errors and places where you forgot to delete a word or something, but no major errors...
The plot's really interesting. Plenty of action, but you don't give everything away all at once... The flash backs/dreams mesh really well with the rest of it. I look forward to your next update, whenever that will be ^.^

this was a good update I am wondering how old is Gaz in this story and professor membrain any way until next time this is invaderzimfannumber1 signign off.

Wow talk about bitter irony much?

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

GAH! NOES! CLIFF HANGER! well at least it was updated. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! *spaz*

Hey! This is a great fic, please update soon. =]

Thank you so much for creating such an awesome story! I got hooked immediately. You're doing great and I can't wait for the next chapter!

WOW! What an excellent story! You've managed to make something serious and logical out of Invader Zim, while still keeping some humor, and (more importantly) the characters IN-CHARACTER. Just... just wow!

Awesomeness like this cannot be read without leaving a review. You are a great author. (Bows.)

This is very well done! Gripping...I can't stop reading it! I hope you update soon!

Finally! A new chappter!! XD nice, Dib acted very much like an Irkin even before his transformation was complete. Weird. I was wondering how Sizz Lorr was involved in all this. :) Update soon! (Poor dibbles)

It gets better and better. Dib finally re-emerged, if only temporarily, and now we see how Membrane's in on it. Will we get to see Membrane find out? Oh wow...t his is so awesome... Epic!

Alana: Nice, hopeful Dib part of blue would like to be Friends with zim as well?

XDXD SO WELL WRITTEN!! I love this fic!!

I'm pretty sure that Sizz-Lorr has purple eyes, not red ones, but eh who cares? red makes him look more evil... maybe.

Now then, this was a rather intereting and long chapter, I had fun reading it, I actually crackled at the fact that Membrane NEARLY killed his own Irken son.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

YEah you finally updated took you long enough any way this was a good chapter I of course did not like the lack of zim because he is a fave but I still like Dib as a irken better then as a human so I showed conser for him at the beging witch is new for me because normally I hate dib so good job and I can't wait till the next chapter until then this is invaderzimfannumber1 signing off.