AW! you have the sweetest way with that pen, I mean that metaphorically, obviously.

aw...please, these are just too beautiful! Thank you so much!

*squeals* this story was so cute, yet very deep. Oh, Sherlock . . . it would have been such a treat if Arthur Conan Doyle gave us inside info on his past . . . . .

Very sweet. I have always been intrieged by seeing the child behind the man, in any case really. I think you've captured Holmes' childhood very neatly.
Well done!
-PGF

That was absolutely adoreable! You need to wright one for all of the stories where she reads about them and they remind her of things he did. I love it! Need more!

Another wonderful story! You're really talented.

That is so darling.

"She remembered his usual myriad of questions about the hows' and whys' of the powdery white carpet" Oh, this is so beautiful and touching. You know?, i just yesterday can know the snow, never snow in Buenos Aires, only yesterday... and i think is a bit sad the white carpet, poor Sherlock's mother. Brilliant the
hints about the "future sleuth", especially, your immense humanity (sometimes this feature is put aside by the fic's authors). Bravo!
PS: Definitely, the one-shot suit you. And the new about a contianuation of... well... i am very happy and look forward.

I am glad you are so prolific and hard worker indeed. I click today and... yes, your new story! Tomorrow, the review.

Ar, that was so sweet! And it was her all along! This is definetly a very accurate interpretation of what Sherlock was probably like as a child. I can't wait for the second part of a matter of taste. Well done.
SherlockAshFowl

BRILLIANT!! I love the connection between "The Blue Carbuncle"'s theme of forgiveness and this. And no names again, you've done this very well.

Wonderfully written, and Holmes is great as a child. ^_^ The only thing is I think you should change the one "Mum" to the "Mother" you've used the other times, and here: -Their young sons' eyes had followed their every movement.- That should be "son's".

That aside, this is very very good. Mae carnen, and keep writing! ^_^

Wow how superbly fitting. This story seems like it's meant to exist right there, it really sounds like it could have happened. I wonder where his mother got the names Mycroft and Sherlock from though . . .