 Archylas 2007-10-04 . chapter 1A very nice drabble.
Although, it wasn't exactly a long one, I think you deserve a review. I really like the part about you describing Sasori and how he was different and perfect - and imperfect as well.
Emotionless.
What a powerful word.
Nice ending, by the way. |
 animeXnutXcase 2007-09-30 . chapter 1I LIKED IT LOTS! AWESOME fanfic! XD XD XD |
 WiNdGoDdEsS688 2007-09-05 . chapter 1hahaha, i'm a fellow review **!
woah..creepy hobo...
i like this one, it was well written (grammar wise too, there are SO many out there that can't spell for **..)
all in all, beautiful one shot~! |
 fionfee 2007-08-18 . chapter 1*smiles* I like it. :) |
 cliffdiver 2007-08-10 . chapter 1Short, but sweet. :) |
 Rambonata 2007-07-28 . chapter 1NO I DONT WANT A HOBO TO GIVE ME A SPECIAL VISIT! |
 saltedsugar 2007-07-21 . chapter 1i like the idea a lot.. i usually like fics or one-shots with long chaps, but your fic is the exception to the rule.. like the ending a lot.. *sighs* i wish they hook up after the battle.. but.. of course this is what ff is for.. and the 'leader-sama' made me laugh so hard, my parents rushed to my room to check what was going on!! haha it really made my day! keep those fics going!! |
 SpeedDemon315 2007-07-16 . chapter 1Aw, poor Sasori! Eh, he needs a hug from Sakura. |
 EvilFaerie17 2007-07-08 . chapter 1I liked this one. It was...unusual but in a good way. It portrayed what the views of perfection and imperfection are and how they are not alike, yet how they are also similar to one another. I liked it.
I think that this little one-shot deserves more than just 4 reviews, but, alas, one cannot force someone to review if they don't want to. ^_^
ttfn!
EvilFaerie17 |
 GabbyCat 2007-07-06 . chapter 1You say this isn't all that good?
Jesus, hun, take a better look!
This is uber-great! My favorite, right here! The way you wrote made this piece seem so much longer, and it sucked me in!
I'm telling you, if you fix those few editing mistakes, this'll be The Art of Perfection!
If you need someone to beta for you, I'd be happy to do it! Just PM me back with the answer!
It was so good, darlin', never lose this talent!
§hOCKS |
 Cukre 2007-07-06 . chapter 1Gigicerisier gave me the link to your story...
and god damn i like it!
we SasoSaku lovers (or in my case maniac) need more fic's about them!
anyway i realy like it...good job!
p.s. poor puppets had a big boom!*grins* |
 Gigicerisier 2007-07-06 . chapter 1Selene!! Your drabble is wicked by far and thanks a lot!!
Now let's start some insane review shall we?
>He met her. She was everything he hated (and everything he loved). She was full of hatred (she was full of love too). She spoke bitter words (and loving ones as well). She hurt him with her glares (and healed him with her ones glances). She darkened his heart with her lies (she brought light into it with her love). Her viridian eyes would always show what she felt. She felt. she was human. She was imperfect.
Aw so sweet but I wonder what kind of lies she said to Sasori.
>Sasori wondered. How with his want, no need of perfection, he could fall in love with such an imperfect being. She was weak. She was a great ninja with a lot of potential, but her feelings made her weak (they made her strong as well). He had noticed it from the beginning. She was unusual. She had pink hair for ** sake. It nearly blinded him with it’s brightness (It was beautiful). She was loud. She spoke with such an annoying voice (It was the sweet sound of wind chimes). She trusted too easily (like he couldn’t). She cried too easily (he never wanted to see tears mar her beautiful face ever again). Maybe Sasori wasn’t so perfect either.
Hm.. I think you need to add some warning like foul language, Selene cos someone might try to bash you..
Heh heh I can see how much Sasori loves Sakura from these.. *smirks*
Well he said that he wasn't perfect all in the battle actually.. *sheepish grin*
By the way, what happend to Sakura? Sasori should get her back for the sake of his sanity!! Go, Sasori, Go! *waves SasoSaku OTP flag*
>He finished the mission and went back to the base (as if he could be killed off so easily). His puppets were still there, still the same. But they felt emptier. In a fit of temper he “borrowed” Deidaras clay and tried to explode them all. Because he finally saw what the puppets really were. They were empty shells that could not comfort him. They could not speak loving words to him. They did not hold the gleam of life that her eyes did. Hell probably no one else in the world held that gleam. They were lifeless. empty. So empty.
Gigi: Aw poor you... *tries to hug Sasori*
Sasori: Don't you dare to touch me, it's only my Sakura who can touch me.. *snorts*
Gigi: ... Geeze...
>When leader-sama asked why Sasori did not use his puppets as much anymore, his only reply was “because it would be an insult to her”. Leader-sama never brought it up again.
>A/N: Dedicated to Gigicerisier who has infected me with the SasoSaku disease. Blah. Review damnit. I live off them. I’m review **! This story was created when I was coffee high. I you don’t review, don’t be surprised if Bob, my pet hobo comes to give you a special visit.
Thanks a lot, Selene!! Now I feel like doodling a comic where Sasori got back Sakura cos he couldn't bear his lonliness anymore if she's still alive in the fic.
Heh heh I've just sent you a review with SasoSaku virus.. *smirks* |
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