Reviews for In Pursuit of Happiness

Reviews For: In Pursuit of Happiness

Jessiy Landroz 2007-11-19 ch 13,	abuseTook me a while to find the time to read this, and I can see LeBlanc managed to keep a stright face till she got to meet her man again, though I wonder how they'll deal with is after the 'afterglow' with their little rump... as for Aqueleve, the guy seriously needs a vacation, cant think of the poor guy under so much pressure and keeping a grin on his face! D: Must be an Al Bhed thing...
Jessiy Landroz 2007-10-28 ch 12,	abuseAh, so Nooj is recovering physically, but is still dead emotionally and wants to stay dead? Looking at the bright side, at least he's not a zombie/undead, or else he'd be living forever with no way to die, and that really wouldnt be peachy, now would it? XD; LeBlanc is keeping her distance, but I'm starting to wonder how long that lady is willing to prowl in the shadows till she gets the chance to jump at her ex-boyfriend, cause I kinda think thoguh she still loves him, he didnt have those strong of feelings towards her in the first place D:
Bizzaz 2007-10-26 ch 1,	abuseaww its good, is there going to be more? OH plEEASSE lol, its fantastic so far ^_^, can't wait to read the rest
Jessiy Landroz 2007-10-09 ch 11,	abuseWhere I got the impression poor LeBlanc hit the wall headfirst with nothing to soften the impact, Aquelev feels like he's just thorwing a ball as hard as he can as said wall and try to dodge it when it bounces off and comes flyingright back at him... if he's not careful, it might take out an eye, and that wouldnt be very pretty... even if it would probably make him look a little more like Gippal, XD; Now, I'm more worried about LeBlanc's sanity, seeing Nooj before she was allowed probably crippled her mind, and having to face him now will only further dent the picture in her mind; rejection is one thing but denile isnt that far away, and I think in a suituation like this Nooj wouild be torn, both physically and emotionally...
Jessiy Landroz 2007-09-29 ch 10,	abuseAside two small typos, (aind instead of and, and accpt is missing an e, accept) I can see things between Nooj and Aquelev are getting better, though Nooj doesnt seem so traumatized by the new arm and leg as I expected; either that or I'm reading his reactions wrong, xD; I worry to think if LeBlanc starts snooping around without his concent, she'll be getting herself into a shipload of trouble O_o; lets hope she doesnt bring the roof down because of it, either...
Jessiy Landroz 2007-09-18 ch 9,	abuseNooj isn't called a Deathseeker for no reason, and though he acted like a hero it wasnt really his intention, and all he wanted was to die? Challeneging fate, maybe? Cause we can figure he'd want to die now cause he'd rather die a man than live a cripple, but before the attack, why did he want to die, or challenege death so much? Want to settle old scores or something? :/ Me thinks Aquelev got his hands full with possessive BeBlanc on one side, a hardheaded (though somewhat loopy here,) Nooj on the other, as well as all the work he had stacking in his office while he's busy with the other two... the poor guy is gonna need a vacation after this...
Jessiy Landroz 2007-09-11 ch 8,	abusePoor Aqelev got his hands full from dawn to dusk, x_x; and just when things started to calm he remembered LeBlanc, and I'm sure she wasn't a happy kitten when she found out, as we already saw in the previous chapters. I kinda dont like the sculptor, there was something about the guy that rubbed me the wrong way; cause he acted like a money grabbing hog, maybe? I dunno... I guess with all the fuss with Nooj and the confusion, things were lost and one thing leads to another, but in the end Nooj will survive, wont he? Also, what kind of idiot was he? DX; He should realize by now that swords cant cut through thick hides! That's what guns are for! True he's a 'knight in shining armor' type, but he shouldnt take the title so literaly! A gun would have worked better against Sin, why go for a sword? Yeesh... men, rolls eyes
Jessiy Landroz 2007-09-07 ch 7,	abuseLots of talking between Aquelve (pronounced: Ack-we-leave?) and LeBlanc, and her questions felt like they were running in circles, but I guess with Nooj keeping his lips zips I dont blame her; sharing her man with another question is always a girlfrind-but-not-yet-a-wife's nightmare, xD; The part in the end with her and Nooj getting back together, I'm kinda getting the feeling that as satisfying as being with him feels, she's starting to wonder if the bruises are really worth it, or is it just me? Cause some women like it 'hard' cause pain is considered a type of pleasure, but I'm not so sure if it would do her body any favors on the long run... She may not leave him when he was broken, who's to say he wont do the same? Unless he's really in love with her, then I guess I'm just being skeptical.. ^^;
General-Beatrix666 2007-08-23 ch 6,	abuseOkay, I see where you're going with this. I was a little confused at first about this at first, until I read your note that the top. I was quite content with how the story was progressing before, but I believe it would be intriguing to see you take this in another direction. I await your next installment.
Jessiy Landroz 2007-08-22 ch 6,	abuseJust got around to reading this, and the more I read the more I figure LeBlanc really (and I mean REALLY!) likes it rough; I hope she's careful with that fetish, it might ruin something besides Nooj's toy...
Jessiy Landroz 2007-08-07 ch 5,	abuseNooj's rejection and bitter rage were well prtraid, though LeBlanc appeard just a little too emotional, she is still in character; but then again, I'm not too keen about being 'in love' so I cant say I understand what she's going through :/ wish Nooj didn't have to be such a stubborn goat, though, but again, it IS Nooj after all... Now, she's going to do her darn best to convince him that she loves him, and since you mentioned the Calm with no hint of Paine or Yuna's group, I'm guessing you'll be directing this AU to another plotline? Then again, you DID say it's an AU, Yuna probably doesnt even exist in this one, and even if she did she probably carries a different name Oo;
Jessiy Landroz 2007-08-01 ch 4,	abuseAh, such a heart wrenching chapter ;n; after becoming so attached to each other, he was called for duty and came back missing a limb or two; ouch. I know she'll probably try to mend them and fix everything (if only kissing it better would work,) but I kinda doubt he'd appriciate it. Pride and maybe anger would blind his judjment, and romantically involved with her or not, he's gonna be one ticked off warrior with what might happen next...
Jessiy Landroz 2007-07-27 ch 3,	abuseWell they didnt say Lust was one of the seven sins for no reason, and combined with Greed, I'd hate to see how this trial of life would end O_o; It is like a drink so intoxicating, once you take a sip you keep drinking and you cant stop; an addiction, just like fan/fiction! XD;;
Jessiy Landroz 2007-07-16 ch 2,	abuseWell, I guess there were a few details added to the previous chapter I had missed, huh? Cause I don't remember no balcony scene... oh well, LeBlanc is still hunting the shark and I hope she doesn't lose an arm or a leg (or her head,) if he didn't like where this was going. Then again, if it's a pretty lady, who's he to complain? Life is too short after all~
Jessiy Landroz 2007-07-07 ch 1,	abuseWell this is an interesting take on the story's settings, and ignoring one or two typos, (eated should be 'eaten' me thinks, and the part where she tucks her hair behind her ear, 'it' had an extra 'i' attached to it,) I like where this is going. The part where whom I guessed was Nooj who ignored her and went dancing with their partner had me wondering if he was dancing with Paine, and the Al Bhed nearly had be crying 'Gippal!' but you surprised me again, XD; Hmm~ Now I wonder where you're taking this story, how exciting~ X3

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